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I'm very impressed with your tale. I like well thought out, well written stories and you've got a winner here. *Munching on world famous zucchini bread* Naruto may be a little out of character but I like him this way. I think everyone's kinda getting tired of stupid weak Naruto. I don't have the music you suggested listening to, but since the beginning of the story I've been hearing Pink Floyd's "Dogs of war" in my head (probably due to your title). If you've got an alert list, I'd like to be added. Thanks for sharing.

OMG, it's so amzing! It's totally one of the best fics out there, if not The Best.
I really loved this chapter cause it felt so real, it was like I was watching the anime or something. And your way of describing the attcks, jutsus and people is incredible, it just leaves me speachless.
I hope that Sakura and Kakashi are alright. Even though I don't really like Sakura, I'd hate to see her die in the manga, which also means that I'd hate to see her die here as well. But if she did/will I won't be mad or anything, because I'm sure that whatever you do, will only make the fic become better, because you're an amazing writer and I doubt this fic will ever be less than fantastic.
Sorry, if it's might sound like I'm sucking up or something, but I'm not, you really deserve all of the credit because this is one hell of a fic.
So keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs

Wow. This chapter was pure craziness. Sasuke's a freaking wild card. Naruto freed all the bijuu. Sakura is missing. How much crazier can it get?? O_O


Keep up the great work. And thanks for that awesome review response. ^^

You know it took me FOUR days to catch up to the manga...I last read it at 3oo and something, the one where Kabuto gives Naruto the book on AKATSUKI, the one where Sasu and deidera fight??? I just have to sat if not for taking all that time to catch up, this would of made little sense to me lol, but omg it makes sooooooo much sense, I don't know if you have gotten to 417 yet, as I was told the manga is at that number but so far Ive only managed to find 415 so that is how far I am, so things might happen that I am not sure of but I am sooo thinking that Sasuke cant be THAT stupid to put all his blind faith into Madara right??? ok enough venting, anyhow this makes so much sense and I am loving this so much, cried when ero sennin died, and I even cried when Itachi did too, damn him for not being the meanie he was potrayed to be, so Sasuke's attacking Konoha huh???? hmmmmm must find out where this goes, I still say I think something is up, both in this fic and in the manga....keep up the awesome writing cant wait for another chapter, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

Holy shit, you sure as hell know how to write! This is by far one of the best fics I've ever read, I mean it. Damn, it's just like reading the manga, or watching the anime because it's so realistic. And that's just the way I like it! :P
Everything about this fic is incredible and I can't wait to contiune on reading it and watch what it'll develope in to. You're really good at portraying Naruto, Kakashi and Kyuubi, and I'm sure that you'll manage to portray the other's the same as well. I feel so sorry for Naruto, he's such a sweetie, sacrifing everything he has for everyone else. *sighs*
Anyway, keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
I'll hope I'll see this one get updated soon.
I'll put this one on my profile over recommended fics, because I really do recommend it ;P
Take care. Hugs

What happened to Naruto? o_O

Great chapter. Naruto's so much more serious and efficient in combat now. He's basically taken over as team leader. As for Sasuke... aside from his Hawk team, just who did he come out of that void with??

Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter~!

I like this story!!

Holy crap!

But seriously, I really enjoy this chapter. The first two were pretty standard, but this last one almost made me cry. The depths in which you went into Naruto's mind, his internalizations, and the whole bit with Minato's journal were really touching. I loved the part where Naruto, reading his father's journal and a letter, written by his father addressed to him, never is able to pick up the sub-context that the forth is his father. There is something sadly poetic about that and I absolutely loved it. Naruto's has so much burden to bare and determination on his shoulders, there never seems time for anything. There's almost a sense of finality about this story where Naruto is tired and looking to take care of all his bases and goals and even wrapping up things with the Kyuubi. He's thinking long term. Its like there's no longer hope for anything left, accept for getting all his goals accomplished and be done with the whole thing.

This is a beautiful story. One I am eagerly looking forward to following along the way. You mentioned this will probably be one of those epic novel sized fanfictions and after reading this last chapter, I have no doubt that it will be just that: epic and worthwhile. Keep up the great work.

This is very well written, and the depth of details really rbings this story to life. I llook forward to reading more of this. Thanks for writing and sharing this.

ooh this is really interesting, what sort of secret is Naru hiding and what is this key or keys??? cant wait to find more and will his choices really be for the best or will he be the undoing of the village and the people he cares for with all his heart??? cant wait to read more, ty for the wonderful start, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)