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for The Fall of the Dogs of War

by dolphina23

schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited to read the next chapter if you have it. It's a pretty new idea, I don't think I've ever read anything quite like this before. The detail is very good also, with the way I could almost see Kakashi and Naruto in the Library and Naruto blowing dust off the book. Nice!
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schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous intro. You've definitely piqued my interest with this one. I like that you've used all the more recent hints about the seal and what not from the manga. Actually, I think this is the first fic I've read that even deals with the idea of "the key" that Jiraiya mentioned lies within Naruto. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work.
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling I'm going to enjoy this :)