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for Broken Strings

by Esotericstyle

person blisblop
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.Powerful.Not into humiliation myself and its here strongly and well done. Kan is acting the prat. Its an effective fic.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^LOL, that's a good point. Usually I have these proofread before I upload them, but I was in a hurry this time. I'll get in there and fix that error.
person Sylvir
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it except he was already naked so he couldn't have been stripped. Other than that it was great