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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I absolutely loved it! NaruSasu is my favorite and always the hottest, especially when sasUKE is hungry for his seme's cock. Lol. I could not help but love the sasuke in drag bit.
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don’t normally leave commits regarding stories, but after reading this I felt the need. I have read many Naruto/Sasuke fan fics and I have to say this is one of the best I’ve read.
Not only did I love the 40's night club setting and the outfits Sasuke wore as Sayuri, but the way you wrote Sasuke and Naruto’s characters.
Despite Sasuke’s feminine personality I think you wrote a balanced character of Sasuke, as in the line where he told Naruto he would kick his ass while wearing a dress. I also think you captured Sasuke’s feelings regarding his sexuality with those he felt for Naruto and what that could mean to both characters without being over the top. I liked the fact that Naruto was written as a strong, smart character who didn’t take the situation lightly, making him come to terms with how he felt after finding out about Sasuke and his own feelings.
Overall, I have to say this is a sweet, stylish well written story and I can’t wait to read more of your work.
Not only did I love the 40's night club setting and the outfits Sasuke wore as Sayuri, but the way you wrote Sasuke and Naruto’s characters.
Despite Sasuke’s feminine personality I think you wrote a balanced character of Sasuke, as in the line where he told Naruto he would kick his ass while wearing a dress. I also think you captured Sasuke’s feelings regarding his sexuality with those he felt for Naruto and what that could mean to both characters without being over the top. I liked the fact that Naruto was written as a strong, smart character who didn’t take the situation lightly, making him come to terms with how he felt after finding out about Sasuke and his own feelings.
Overall, I have to say this is a sweet, stylish well written story and I can’t wait to read more of your work.
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh~ that was really sexy! I especially liked the scene where Sasuke starts of saying "don't..etc" and you think he isn't ready to have sex yet, but then he's all "until you're inside me!" Wow, that was so hot!
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just loved this, please do post the rest, you're killing me!
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice story, i like how Naruto can soothe Sasuke's insecurities about himself. It's nice to see Sasuke leaning on Naruto's strength for a change rather than the other way around. Great job =)
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time I've read this, so I wanted to say that while sasuke is ooc, I really like this. It is a nice outward representation of the fragileness that I think Sasuke really has.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it and can't wait for the steamy epilogue ^_^ It was a great short fic!
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeee! hehehehee ^^
Loved it! Can't wait for the conclusion! Keep up the good work.
Loved it! Can't wait for the conclusion! Keep up the good work.
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! The confession was absolutely perfect! I was so scared Naruto would leave Sasuke but it turned out he didn't :)
I'm soooo happy they both like eachother. This story is so beautifully written. The descriptions are perfect, everything is perfect! It is emotional enough to keep everyone on their toes.
Please please update soon!
I'm soooo happy they both like eachother. This story is so beautifully written. The descriptions are perfect, everything is perfect! It is emotional enough to keep everyone on their toes.
Please please update soon!
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke... He needs a hug. *pokes Naruto to run after him*