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for Eye of the Beholder

by PrplGrl

schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So who are the ones stalking Shika back to his apartment and RAGING across the landing from Iruka's? Don't tell me this is DONE?
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what what what!!! i wanna know who's seething outside Iruka's door. im thinking kakashi....but of course, i wont really know until you update.

please update now soon
^_^''


*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*f
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see more of this! I loved the Gentle Fist series and hope that maybe you'll do a sequel for that with Sai and Shika.
person eve4mem
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I reread it agian ^_^ and I still like it. But it's been a while since it was posted, please update? I'm wondering if that jealous person was jealous at Iruka or at Shika because there was two people in that kiss not just one. I'm hoping it's an Iruka fic, he's my favorite cutie ^_~ And it did seem to be centered around him. Either way I can't wait to see more.
person No One Of Importance
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Could you PLEASE update this story, I really REALLY want to know what happens... I love the way you've started out by the way. It's got intrigue in it.

KUDOS!!!
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more...*wiggles impatiently in her chair*...ahem, please ^_^
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! man! i didn't think I had a Shika/Iruka kink but wow! oh my god! please continue. I need to read the next chapter!
person LonelyDove
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So sad =( update it sounds good =D =D
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Crack this may be, but it's hilarious! Keep writing!
person Sanee
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, double Pineapple-head action!
Shikamaru's just good in pretty much any shounen-ai/yaoi pairing.
-Patiently awaits update on Earth Angel-