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for Amaterasu

by SilentSanctum

schedule August 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! I think I melted at the sweet end! Thanks for the japanese-english vocabulary, by the way, it was, indeed, useful. ;) And back to your story... well there is really nothing much to say, except it was perfect, your Itachi was perfect and your descriptions made me f**ing ho*ny! -_- Aaanyway... I added your profile among my most favoured authors and will surely read all of your stories. And since I am also a little writer myself (although not as good as you and also not a native english speaker) I'm going to review every one of them, because I know how pleasing it is to hear that you've done a hell of a good work.
person Risotto
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm any chances of an update for this?
person Ikippiki
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was really good! Itachi is not OOC (well not much) and the sex was hot! I would be thrilled if you wrote a long story about the 2 of them!
person DewiSri
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Is in love with this story* Well done, keep on writing!!
person terra
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WoW! That was brilliant! This is probably one of the only well written ItaSaku lemony fics I've read. Great work. And it wasn't short either. And it also had a plot <3

I loved the ending too, I'm such a sucker for happy endings like that. Excellent job with this story :)
person tukixoxo
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOMENESS!!!! total nose bleed! keep up the awesome work! Feel free to write a Kiba/Hinata hentai! x3
person Emon
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was soooooooo good!!!! In my opinoin you should really take advantage of your talent for writing great fanfiction and capitalize on this particular pairing. the lemons were pretty descriptive, almost to the point it was graphic. . . almost. all in all, it was almost tasteful. it wasn't too much, it wasn't over the top, and it wasn't so much going on within the lemon that it took away from what you set to accomplish. You did an amazing job! I'd love to see more of your work! i love the Itachi/Sakura pairing! other pairings i believe you would do damn near perfectly with would be Neji/Sakura, and Gaara/ Sakura. bye!
person Deunan
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! you just shitted on everybody! you really have a gift for this. like another had mentioned, i really like the Neji/Sakura pairing. i think you'd do a great job with those two. you got a special talent for keeping everyone in charater, with capturing their essence without taking anything away from the story itself. to sum it up, love love love!!!! please update soon!!!!
person LaLa
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hawtt. i love itasaku <3 keep it up!
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it! update soon!