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for What is and What Should Never Be

by QueSeraSera

person Tamyka
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh I want more!!! That was great, the whole story is interesting and I was dying to know Neji's secret. I'm glad we do now. The whole thing not just his feelings. Anyways I hope you update soon so I can read more. I really enjoyed this!
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe =^^= Yeah, its hard to foster a relationship with two emotionally stunted individuals. What Neji needs to do is jump Naruto back. (Although I think I prefer Naruto as the dominate partner. Neji needs to be taken. heh. Not that I'm opposed to them switching up from time to time. *blush*) (*hint hint) lol


Great work with the chapter. Good luck with school and update when you can. ^^
person Spinner
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha Chapter 2 Only a ninja wou leave a thearpy session viva tree!
person ......
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the name and history of the new dude--does Neji truly have competition for Naruto?
And I like Naruto's love of pain--I can totally see him being a masochist! I truly like that you are writing something like this and I can't wait till more!
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. could it be Sai? >:) hehehe

I feel bad for Naruto. He totally freaked out when he thought he was frightening Neji. Neji should have gone after him. He obviously has no idea what sort of inner turmoil he caused the blonde and needs to correct it or else Naruto will never jump him again!!!! O_O

Keep up the great work. ^^
person Raholea
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
neji, likes naru but doesn't want to admit it...
and naruto just needs some hard core lovin...
hmm...
*chuckles evilly*

can't wait to read more!!!
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha! The more he tries to ignore Naruto, the more Naruto's gonna be all up in his business. Silly Neji. He just has no idea. Naruto will not stand to be ignored. =^^= hehehe
Keep up the good work.
person AerieTigre
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm impressed. I like this.
person Onikage
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!! The wonderful third chapter!! IT'S GONE!! ;.; BRING IT BACK!! BRING IT BACK!!!!!
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I like where this is going! Is that a bad thing?