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for Tears of Crimson | Chapter 03

by KibaNaru

schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you're back!!!!!! I enjoyed this chapter. Naruto made Kiba happy in returning his kiss and accepting his offer to take him to the festival. I bet when Kiba gets home the Clan has already invoked the law or has disapproved of any same sex mating. Poor Kiba, I can't wait to find out!!!! I hope you have a wonderful holiday!!!!!!
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this! *squeal*
person miski32
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That part about Kiba's cheesy moves on Naruto is something that I can seriously see Kiba doing. When I read that I'd about died laughing and couldn't stop myself from reading that section again. Thanks, I needed that
person Tall tree-san
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Can't wait for more!
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Kiba. He was trying to get close to Naruto all night and was refused. Is Naruto secretly still saving himself for Sasuke? Or, does he just not want to rush things with Kiba? I'm so glad you hadn't abandoned this story.XD I'll be looking out for the next chapter.
person a kitsunes light
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chpater! And I like how their relatioship is developing,not too quick nor too slow. Also I think that it was time that for once naruto was the one to have more selfcontrol, because I've never read a fic where it says so explicitly like in here that he has more selfcontrol but still feels something
person a kitsunes light
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!!! +
I can't wait to read more!!!
Also I hope kiba and naruto get and stay together!!
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! They're back together. I can't wait for them to get even closer. Will they have a fully blossomed relationship before Sasuke enters the picture?!!!
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! That was a POWERFUL story. I'm real excited about this read. I also love the pairing. I don't know if I readily read tragedies but I have read one or two before. I have to say I'm pretty sure I'd like to continue this one.
person Ivy
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this beginning ^_^ Especially the way you've written Kiba, anyways can't wait for the next part.