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June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Night In South Beach I cant wait to read the double penetration that is so HOT!!!! I'm looking forward to reading more so please update soon!!
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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoop! ^^ I love this story so much! It's very well writen and I really love the formating and plot line! XD WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!!
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I'm looking forward to reading more so please update soon!!!
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NO ONE writes ItaNaruSasu better than you do. NO ONE.
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You, are, a, GOD!! I love this story!! :3 So wonderfly smuty!! lol, WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!! ^^
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Chesire cat grin* Niiiice...
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I missed an update! I came on yesterday, browsed the titles available and noticed your fic near the top. I squealed in delight, and jumped right into chp 3. I was reading~ and liking what I was reading~ and then I thought I might have missed something.. I had been about a fourth of the way through the chapter when I decided to back track a chapter. Lo and hehold none of it rang a bell! SO! I read chapter two, and then I read chapter three, in one sitting. Err.. laying... I was kinda stretched out on the couch. I didn't realize how long I'd been reading til I looked up and I noticed the sun was in an entirely different position from when I started reading. But my, oh my, let me get back to my review..
I wondered, would it be saying too much to tell you what your words did to me physically... lol I guess that'd be pretty darn perverted, but, I'm guess it's a tad too late for us to worry about being perverted when we have a very active obsession with yaoi fanfics. Mmmm.. Gyah! Must focus.
I'm pissed off that I have yet to go to a club like the one run by the Uchihas'. You must tell me where you go clubbing and get your inspiration! That would be such fun! I spend too much time at home on my computer reading! I wanna experience some of the greatness I read! Like 2 dark haired beauties sandwiching a hot blond, on the dance floor, and grinding against him until he completely unravels. That was hot in writing, I bet it would be even hotter in person. Sex on the dance floor! Woooo!!
And sex in the bedroom, and the bathroom, between two guys, and three, soon to be four~! Ack!! I'm excited!! I never thought fisting could be written in such an appealing manner, but you proved me wrong. Now I've seen fisting (porn) and it wasn't at all appealing, which is why 95% of all porn sucks. Now, erotic fanfiction is a whole new ballpark. There is actually emotion, and a desire to please the other person that just makes the entire scene (scenes) more than just sexually arousing. It's addicting.
I keep talking (writing) and talking (writing) and I hope it isn't bothersome =( I just want to write more than "That was so hot!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!" You're writing style is amazing and its always a pleasure to read. I think this fic is full to the brim with sexyness and everything that is wonderful and I adore you for it and I'd bake you cookies and other yummy treats every day! I look forward to all your future posts! XOXOX Kei-Chan
I wondered, would it be saying too much to tell you what your words did to me physically... lol I guess that'd be pretty darn perverted, but, I'm guess it's a tad too late for us to worry about being perverted when we have a very active obsession with yaoi fanfics. Mmmm.. Gyah! Must focus.
I'm pissed off that I have yet to go to a club like the one run by the Uchihas'. You must tell me where you go clubbing and get your inspiration! That would be such fun! I spend too much time at home on my computer reading! I wanna experience some of the greatness I read! Like 2 dark haired beauties sandwiching a hot blond, on the dance floor, and grinding against him until he completely unravels. That was hot in writing, I bet it would be even hotter in person. Sex on the dance floor! Woooo!!
And sex in the bedroom, and the bathroom, between two guys, and three, soon to be four~! Ack!! I'm excited!! I never thought fisting could be written in such an appealing manner, but you proved me wrong. Now I've seen fisting (porn) and it wasn't at all appealing, which is why 95% of all porn sucks. Now, erotic fanfiction is a whole new ballpark. There is actually emotion, and a desire to please the other person that just makes the entire scene (scenes) more than just sexually arousing. It's addicting.
I keep talking (writing) and talking (writing) and I hope it isn't bothersome =( I just want to write more than "That was so hot!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!" You're writing style is amazing and its always a pleasure to read. I think this fic is full to the brim with sexyness and everything that is wonderful and I adore you for it and I'd bake you cookies and other yummy treats every day! I look forward to all your future posts! XOXOX Kei-Chan
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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You . . . are . . . *fans self* Wow. That was deliciously, ridiculously hot. And I'm thrilled to have one chapter that has Ita/Sasu, Naru/Sasu/Naru AND Kaka/Ita. It's like Christmas has come early!
I also applaud your writing of Itachi and Kakashi. You were worried about them bein OOC, but I really don't think they were. Kakashi and Itachi both hit my radar as natural doms, but as the saying goes, SOMEone's got to be on the bottom, and I think Kakashi does a really, really good job . . . *has to stifle another nosebleed as she remembers.*
In short, you, your characters, and your story are awesome, and I hope to see more of it soon!
I also applaud your writing of Itachi and Kakashi. You were worried about them bein OOC, but I really don't think they were. Kakashi and Itachi both hit my radar as natural doms, but as the saying goes, SOMEone's got to be on the bottom, and I think Kakashi does a really, really good job . . . *has to stifle another nosebleed as she remembers.*
In short, you, your characters, and your story are awesome, and I hope to see more of it soon!
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG that was hot! This story ROCKS!
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:snickerfit:
It's so amazing and pervy that I want to jump into the scene with a video camera. Of course the Uchiha bro's would probably kill me, dismember me, then take my camera for their own use. Those selfish bastards. :indignant pout:
It's so amazing and pervy that I want to jump into the scene with a video camera. Of course the Uchiha bro's would probably kill me, dismember me, then take my camera for their own use. Those selfish bastards. :indignant pout: