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for The Day He Said Goodbye

by Shaylilin

person April Ford
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! I'm so so so glad I didn't miss anything!!!!!! That was totally AMAZING!!!!!! Everything happened for them so perfectly, for everybody. I loved the way Shika was so surprised with the little party of everyone. Then, Naruto being Hokage and Shino asking him to marry him. AAAAHHHHHH!!!!!! All's right with the world.LOL. Man, I can't wait for the next story to this one you spoke of, I can just picture it with kids and all from everyone.XD(hinthint) I'm happy now, your stories make me so happy.XD
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squees and bounces up and down happily* that was such a lovely end to a lovely story. I know you said before, it doesn't bother you if i don't review consitantly, but it bothers me!! I love that Naruto finally became Hokage, and the new council, wonderful, they would make an excellant council. I know I'm rambling, but, oh well.....^.^ XXOO
person Infek
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story was so sweet and romantic and optimistic. I really liked it.
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, this chapter was so touching. Yeah, I love Shika too, I'm glad you didn't kill him off.:) Poor Shika, having to deal with not being an active (so to speak) shinobi any longer. Neji knew he needed to be needed at that moment. I can't wait for their talk so Shika won't feel sorry for himself, although I guess he realizes that now with his long hard good cry.:( I'm really excited by Sasuke's new mission protecting his boyfriend. Congrats to Gaara!! Now they can really get to know one another and definitely get more one on one time. So I guess Sasuke will be a Sand nin soon and like Naruto said possibly be married to the new Kazekage. Can't wait for next time.XD
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! I THOUGHT THAT YOU WERE GOING TO KILL SHIKA.......PLEASE DON'T SCARE ME LIKE THAT........AS FOR GAARA'S DAD......."DEATH TO THE KAZAKAGE"..........SASUKE AND GAARA DESERVE ONE ANOTHER THEY ARE SO PRECIOUS TOGETHER.
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, poor Shika. And Gaar and Sasuke love each other, that's so sweet. I'm with you on being alone with your kids. I go nuts when it's just a weekend. I can't imagine ten days. Shit.
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Girl!!! Shika can't be a ninja anymore? That's too sad!! For a moment I thought like Neji, that Shika was gone. Oh well, he lives, good.:) I wish it was realistic that Gaara could move in with Sasuke but won't he be Kazekage soon? or rather in the future?? I loved when Kankurou said he and Temari would protect Gaara from their father. Then Gaara said "you do like me" or something. That melted my heart. Another moment like that was when Sasuke said he loves Gaara and Gaara said, "I'm not sad you said that Sasuke. Why am I crying? Then he buried his head in Sasuke's chest. *Sigh* That made me want to hug both of them.:) Great chapter!!!! It was also traumatic for Neji.:(
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! I only have one kid and I can still relate. That was so funny what you said.LOL.
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the comment on my reviews I really love reading your stories. I can't wait to read the Gaa/Sasu story you made for me. Oh I'm so touched about that!!! I love that Sasuke said Gaara looks so beautiful. He's getting more comfortable about his feelings for Gaara. Gaara seems comfortable as well hugging Sasuke. They are so adorable.:)