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for The Day He Said Goodbye

by Shaylilin

schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved everything about this chapter. First, how Gaara has a handle on Shukaku and how his sand fell away because he was in a calm environment. He trusts Sasuke. Second, the kitchen scoop from everyone about the way Sasuke is for Gaara's benefit. Lastly, I especially liked the talk the two shared it was so intimate and nurturing at the same time. You've done an incredible job at Gaara's innocence of the world. I love it.XD
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Everything CAN be fixed by ramen. LOL. This chapter made me love Gaara even more, if possible. My favorite Naruto moment(s) was when Gaara came back to Suna and everyone was so happy to see him, and he was completely shocked. And then, when Naruto was leaving, and Gaara stuck out his hand to shake with Naruto, and he was too shocked to move, so Gaara used his sand to help Naruto's hand meet his. See, I'm tearing up just thinking about it. That was a great chapter. I'm glad that he finally realized that he is more loved than he thought he was. XXOO
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schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I love it!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in your next update.
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! When I was a teen, my friends and I went to see that movie twice it was so funny we were so in love with Cary Elwes.*pants*LOL. Now your talking about Pretty in Pink another favorite of mine, WOW!! I love Gaara and Sasuke time and I'm glad you let Sasuke teach Gaara about talking to Shukaku. Thank you for what you said about Deidara that's good to know. The prank I almost forgot about was so,so funny!! Also a drunk touchy-feely Hiashi and the PRESENT to die for. I cracked up!!!!! I love your sense of humor.:) Lastly, the surprise SMUT at the end with Neji topping and Shika having a slight problem with Neji's attitude was GREAT!!!!! Can't wait for next chapter.
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was such a sweet chapter.......please update soon.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes I would tell you, and I see no danger of that happening any time soon, or ever for that matter.Hurray!! New chapter!! Poor heartbroken Deidei. Gaara was adorable when he got the ice cream headache. I can imagine the look on his face, and the glare he must have given Sasuke. Kankuro is an ass for telling Gaara that he would be a third wheel. As much as I like him, I hope he catches the "clapp" from Ino. LOL. I love The Princess Bride, for a million different reasons. An ex-boyfriend actually made me watch it. He first told me, "As you wish." I asked him what the hell that meant, and he said to watch and find out. Very sweet, but the fucker ended up breaking my heart, and I haven't been able to watch it again until recently. I like Chouji, and I'm glad he got Temari. I hope she rocks his world. When I was reading the, "uses for her tongue" part, my mind went right to the gutter. Naruto is such a perv too. LOL. XXOO
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! When I read, "Fuck you then, Sasuke...." I was like Damn, then I read just what I had been thinking. You wrote, "Did anyone bother to threaten Sasuke about hurting me?" Poor Deidara, I hope that's the end of seeing him unless it's in a nice capacity. I just don't want him trying to blow up Sasuke or Gaara.LOL I like how you portrayed the parents. Especially Hiashi, you get tired of seeing him portrayed as an uptight asshole who has it in for Neji.:) I'm really settling in for watching Sasuke and Gaara cultivate their relationship. It's really going to be a wonderful one for Sasuke. Oh!! The other Author Houseki is the one who has Gaara and Sasuke matched up. I just LOVE this pairing. Do another story with them paired up. I know I'm jumping the gun cause this one's not done yet.XD
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o wow gaara and sasuke that's will be one hell of a pair. thanxz and update soon
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, so much to talk about. I'm so excited!!! I love everything about this chapter. First, the Chuunin Exams. That was neat that you changed them a bit and how there was a draw between Naruto and Neji. Second, the budding romance of a pairing I've only seen maybe one or two stories on, Gaa/Sasu or will it be Sasu/Gaa?XD I think they would be great together because Sasuke could teach Gaara along the way and also help him get to know himself all over again. Gaara would love him passionately being Sasuke's the only one (other than Naruto-which is friendship) whom he'll have ever loved. Do you know what I mean?? Lastly, Sasuke finding the right words or way to break it off with Deidara. Man! I can't wait for the next update.XD
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whooooooooo! Gaara is feeling jealous, and is getting butterflies. How cute. ^.^ Poor Deidei. I'll just say one more thing, and not say anything else about this...you're lucky to have a husband so understanding, and not obsessed with it. That's all. LOL. Your response made me laugh, and my man asked me what the hell was so funny. LOL. Yeah...I'm lucky if I get to read a chapter from any story without being interrupted, so it is hard for me to review. But it's still no excuse. A good writer should be told their stories are good. ^.^