rate_review Reviews

This is a great read with surprising content and thoughtful characters. I've really enjoyed reading it and wish I'd read on it from the start(I read it in one sitting and my legs are NOT as happy as the rest of me). I'm HOOKED! Thank you for sharing! Oh, I totally forgot about constructive criticing, so don't really expect it- I was too distracted. And, a question- do I detect the possibile hint of Shino/Choji? If so, it's an unusual pairing and I'm further hooked out of curiousity, even if it's written in as a minor background pairing.

Nice work! (And if you want constructive criticism, it won't kill me to re-read!)
~Q

I like how you make the characters care for one another. Shika is so caring toward Sasuke and Neji is caring toward Shika and understanding toward the situation.

Damn! Poor Sasuke, it's kinda like Cinderella. I hope he gets better soon. He doesn't have a friend in the world. Other than Shika.

Good! Closure for Shika and a friend as well, in Naruto.

That's neat you have them all in their respective teams. I also LOVE that bit of Kaka/Iru you threw in there. It's nice how you make Iruka the reason Kakashi is late like we saw in the episode.

That was an 'Awwwww' chapter. It seems like all tense loose ties were closed up and healed. Can't wait for our new couple to start their new relationship.

Okay sweety; I'm only two chapters in and all I have to say is 'Neji go kick the sorry dickhead's ass! You know you can!' Ugh, I really really hate Sasuke. Of course, you haven't noticed that before. Good story. Very interesting premise. Was kinda 'ewww-ed' by the shikasasu factor, but I'll live. *shudders* Gotta go read the rest. *hugs*

Finished! Now I'm waiting for more. Oh and kudos! You actually made me feel bad for Sasuke. That is a trick. LOL Thanks for the fun read hon.

Poor shika!! =( loved it and cant wait for more! =D

hooray! good stuff. I like that you have them older around this time, it makes it more believable