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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good stuff! I like where you're going with this story
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it =D cant wait for the next one ;)
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! I love the plot, the way you did the HE's, the surprise at the end of who the is. I love Shika/Neji also so so much!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP ON WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow sasuke really has it rough. it kinda hurts watching his life spiral down and drop all together. wondering... this is keeping me awaiting lol. keep up the splendid stuff you do. -.o
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start, your story looks really interesting(a little sad at first, but break-ups usually are), and I love Neji/Shikamaru fics. Can't wait to read more, looking forward to the next chapter!^_^
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is off to a great, albeit a sad start. There just aren't enough with Shikamaru and Neji. I think they are an awewome pairing, no matter what order you put them in. I hope you continue this one to it's end, and I hope that you put your other ideas into print as well. All the best, I'll keep looking for updates.
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ouch, there's a lot of pain in this story and i had to choke back my own tears. -sniffle- but that's what happens in many relationships, and i think you created a great feeling to it already with some hope hidding around each corner to the outline of your revized characters. looking forward to see how shika grows from this experience. thank the shinigami his parents are understanding. -.o