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schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*loves*
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*luvs chapter*
person Jay
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG This story is awesome you really need to update and soon.
your reader
~jay
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter, but I wanted to point out that the clerk in the suit shop is apparently wearing two different sets of clothes in one paragraph. ^_^
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter, thanks again for the heads up
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chap, love the male bonding at the end..name calling and projectiles ^_^
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com.
person asm613
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
((( his intention was to blackmail Zabuza if he didn’t do as he was instructed. Zabuza sighed and told him he would be in Konoha by nightfall. With that settled Danzo hung up and smiled thinking that no one would interfere with him now.)))___If Zabuza was smart, instead of killing Minato he should have killed Danzo. Because if Danzo would blackmail him once; there's nothing to keep him from blackmailing him again. That's sad for Naruto.
person TheSimi
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved Gaara in this chapter...so adorable! And Sasuke can be quite the sneak even calling in favors from Sasori to get Naruto on the trip.

Thank you so much for thsi chapter and I can't wait to read more!
person TheSimi
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another great chapter and I can't wait to read more! I like a scheming Kakashi...He'll do anything to hold Iruka in his arms :)