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Little problem with the whole 'knows right from wrong' bull in the latest chapter.... that is so viewpoint outside of a very few things, as to be totally meaningless in real life.

Xcellent f*cking story

Neji's out.(hyuuga secrets n all).Kaka is my fav char.,but he's 2 old,gomen.(wasn't that gr8 @ teaching naru)kiba,choji,ino..no,no,no.hinata would B gr8,but another hyuuga.I'm not sure what kinda of fighter U want her 2 B,but shika,ot lee.that's my vote (if it's not 2 late.)gr9 f*cking story,arigato

its a hard one to pick i like the 3 males but cant pick one over the others but i do like 2 over all 3 those 2 are Neji and Shika outside of that i cant pick sorry

wow that was awsome .. i love it and i think it would be funny if kakashi or shika is mahina’s teacher .. please please update soon later for now

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Hi - please don't be mad - I love the story, I really do. I didn't realize how long this was, but I just had to get it out. Please forgive me (I was also too lazy to sign in, but u can always email me back...)

I'm liking the story so far, but I can't help but feel that you rushed it a bit. I was completely lost at the beginning of the last 3 or 4 chapters. I had to re-read a few chapters just to make sure I didn't skip any before I realized that you did a time skip and made her older.

I know it's your story and you'll do what you want.. but I hate what you've done regarding Sasuke. Mahina was terrified of him, how can he just... fall back into their confidence just like that, how is he witholding info that both he and Mahina know, but Naruto doesn't know as is implied at the ending of this chapter.

The flow just isn't making sense to me. And I'm disappointed because I had such high hopes for this fic. I was really looking forward to a well-written, well-thought out story - which it is. I'm not flaming you. But you know when you love something that has such potential only for the creator to seemingly rush it - it makes one frustrated.. I only want you to take your time - don't care how long I have to wait for the next chapter - just, blow me away like you did in the first few chaps.

I also agree with the person regarding Tsunade's role - It's pissing me off, because she is supposed to be the best, and being the Hokage who has to assign Seduction Missions (assuming those exist in cannon [cause i just dont know really]), I would think she know's what a sexually abused vajayjay (woman's genitals) look like. She should at least recognize mental illnesses and disorders - if only the basics.. But again, you are the author, and I respect that. Just, voicing my oppinion as an excited fan is all.

BTW - I think Kakashi would be the obvious teacher - he has the most knowledge beyond jutsu, he seems to be somewhat patient and understanding he can regal her with stories of both her dad and granddad and still protect her if it comes down to it and be her confidant should she need that shoulder. Plus he might see it as making up for the neglect he showed Sakura... Plus I can't help but think he's a lil lonely on the inside. He needs a precious person that he has a direct platonic relationship with. Makes me wanna jus kiss him til his cheeks fall off!! lol

My second choice is Neji - because I love him. Point Blank. Hands Down lol! And also because He might see it as making it up to Hinata and Naruto for his attitude in the chuunin exams and etc. He needs to be distracted from the clan, I believe...

AGAIN - SOOO SORRY FOR THE LONG-WINDED REVIEW!

Oh - also concerning Neji - He'd be a hard ass teacher, like Hiashi, and like Gai, He'd push her and challenge her and wouldn't take his role lightly. He wouldn't give her any slack, hell even if she gets him to lighten up and take the stick out his ass, he'd be stern and on her back nonetheless - He'd work the hell outta that girl. That's how I picture Neji.

So really it all comes down to where you see ur fic going, and the characteristics she'll need for any future conflicts with classmates and oto-nins. Then choice the best character that would instill those traits in her.

With kaka-sensei it would be loyalty. Loyalty, inner strength, wisdom, intuition.

With Neji-poo, it'd be hard work, determination, ferocity, fast thinking on your feet (kaka too).

I didn't even consider Shika, cause he's just tooo lazy! lol lol lol

Regarding Sasuke - when will you let us know what really happened that night he returned to Konoha?

give the girly to shika or Kakashi those are the 2 she would probly work best with tho neji comes a close 3rd for me

btw lovely as always

This is one of the best stories I have ever read! Keep up the great work.
For the poll of jounin teachers, I cast my vote for neji, he seems like he'd be a good teacher for her.

its a toss up between Shika and Neji for me Shika couse he would know how to handle her and Neji couse he is a strong fighter yet has brains as well and Hinata would be some what invalved with some of his training i bet