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for Chalkdust Torture

by SumiHatake

schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i felt like Iruka was going to have a heart attack ...lol..nice drabble.
person Xoteem
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Every time I read this story I get all warm and fuzzy inside! =^.^=
person Nelly
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww. That is a very cute story. I love it.
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww this is realy cute.
im not sure it should be on AFF unless you plan to add more adult-type situations angst/smex/ect though as its not really an adult story but still i enjoyed reading it.
it was cute and sweet.
KAKASHI AND IRUKA ARE LOVE
like
SASUKE AND NARUTO OR NARUTO SASUKE.
and most yaoi pairings in the naru non cannon world.
thank you for sharing your story
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Squeeeeeeeeeeee* Sooo kawaii!!!!!!! ^_^
person lo
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was too cute!!! I am sitting here grinnin' like a fool. Great job!
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww so cute!
person qwerty
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very cute^^
person naracest
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was adorable! Oh that was so sweet. You're a fluff genius. I love your short little stories. They're so uplifting.....except for the ones that are crushingly beautiful. But i digress...You're lovely writing has brightened my day. Wonderful!
Cheers

Meg
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM

I love it. Simply love it.