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for Kindred

by Prism0467

schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCKIN" GOD!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT HOT HOT!!! This was amazingly well done, bravo. Keep them comming and you'll have my support!! lol ;). But just so you know....12 inches is WAY TOO BIG!! The avarage guy is like 5-7 and one of the biggest guys known of is 9 something and he's a porn star because of it!! XD Just thought you might want to make that small correction maybe to Neji 7 and wide and Shika 9 and long dunno. But anywho keep up the amazing work!!
Luv you!!
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a sweet ending.
*le sigh*
person Twiggies
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter!
Hehe, take that Kiba! He was really rude.
You shouldn't say things like that to Neji. Especially if they include Shikamaru. xDD

Heh, it's good that Shikamaru stayed in bed.
He can actually sleep now, without medicine.

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stupid Kiba. *growls*
I think that Neji put him in his place though, at least for now.
*sigh* some people are such jerks.
And what a rebel, going without a tie? I'm thinking hell has frozen over. j/k :).
*stares at the screen waiting for an update*
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! That was a great lemon!!! Good work on it. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^^ And yes that update was fast enough for me. Thank you so much. GREAT WORK!!! ^__^
person Twiggies
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, so hot!
Hehe, Neji's such a teaser. ;D
But he couldn't resist in the end. xD
And Shika fell straíght to sleep. xD Well, he more like passed out! :D
Lovely.

Really hit and awesome chapter once again!
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
person Twiggies
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, hhhot!
They are so smexy. ;D
And you've written them well!

Mmm, a little dirty talking, cock rings and all!
Neji has prepared everything Perfectly! xD
Oh my..! Twelve inches? Wah, Shika~! <3

Hehe. xD
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
I really want to read the next part of the lemon! 8D
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*goes for a dool bucket*

WOW WOW WOW
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Niiiiice. Really HOT!!! I can't wait for the next part. Update the min you finsh the chap, k? Great Work!!! ^___^
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was hot. I'm waiting for the next one now.