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for Kindred

by Prism0467

schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was super hot and so sweet at the same time.

Neji doesn't want Shika to wake up alone. I can't think of anything sweeter.

I'm so in love with this couple. I love the way you write them, too.
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, it's so sweet that Neji can read Shikamaru's mind.
I love, love, love this pair.
Another great chapter.
I look forward to the next.
person Twiggies
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
We're almost there!
Well, They are almost starting! xD

Hehe, the products and stuff that Neji got to Shika were good. xD
Organic, even.
Razor and shave cream, too? :DD
And that douche!

My oh my. xD
Really good chapter once again!
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great work as always. Sorry I haven't be revwiing. I read your updates before heading to work at 5 am my time. So ya, great work on the chapter, and update as soon as you can! ^__^
person despairs
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Show him Neji, show him good ;)

Another cliffy but i didnt mind, good things come to those who wait right. This was hot, really hot.
I like a possessive top especially when it's Neji. Great job, looking forward to the next chapter.
person Twiggies
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehee, Hot!
Really awesome chapter.
Neji really got Shika there, eh?
Really hot chapter!
And very well written. I liked it how Neji was so persistent on getting all the answers he wanted. :D

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Great story!
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It wouldn't be an intriguing story if they didn't work it out first. Their friendship is more important.
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Fantastic. Terrific.

I'm not one of those pure smut kind of girls. I love plot.
This story has so much I could scream. I just get going and then - wait for the next chapter.

Which is what I'm doing right now. *watches screen anxiously*
person Twiggies
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!
I liked the way Neji got SHikamaru to talk to him.
He's so sexy. xD

...Wahh! CLIFFIE !
How could you! Meany.. xD

I want to read more~!
So did Neji just kind of tell Shikamaru that he is gay?
And Shika too?
Finally they're getting somewhere. xD
And with a little help of the sake, everything should go smoothly from here..
Or maybe not that smoothly.
Write more so I know!
Awesome chapter and story!
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would come back anyway! Oh cliff-hanger. I don't think my heart can take it.

Poor Shika, he's really upset. But they love each other, so it's okay, right? RIGHT? :)

*waits impatiently for the next chapter*