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by Prism0467

schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why must I always be left wanting more? :)
I'll survive. Updates have been so quick! Thank you.
This chapter was good; I like feelings.
person Twiggies
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Neji lives in a hell of an cool place! :D
Shikamaru and Neji are just so.. sweet. xD
The feelings are becoming more clearer now, eh?
Well, more irresistable anyway. xD

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
I can't wait to read more!
Really good story. :D Loving it.. And you for writing it! xD
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH YOU ARE JUST BEING CRUEL! Who in thier right mind wouldn't want to come back?
person despairs
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wicked cliffhanger. I think the pervert in the bathroom jackin off to Shika was pretty hot myself....weird guy, but hot.
I'm dyin to read the next chapter, now that they have admitted to being gay, we might see some action eh? Neji toppin Shika...mmmm
i just cant wait to read it. Anyways, i think you should have WAY more reviews for this story because it's just that damn good.
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't imagine! What type of place were they in? At least it got them thinking about one another!
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man... what a freaky group of people in that restaurant.

Although, I guess I might be hitting up Neji or Shika if I were around them.
I can't wait to see what happens now.

I still love this story and am waiting patiently for the next chapter.
person Twiggies
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, God!
What a chapter! :D
They met really horrible people! Horrible in a good, hilarious way. xD
God.. That.. that guy was jerking off in front of Shika, and that women was trying to.. God! xDDD
Hilarious.
Poor Shikamari and Neji though. Not so nice dinner. :D
And Neji punching that guy was really good. xD :D

...And Neji makes a good uke too!
He has the looks for it.. But maybe he is too masculine for in this fic..
But Neji-uke can be an uke too. xD
They're both so sexy it doesn't matter who tops though. xD

I hope you keep writing and udpate soon again!
Really nice and funny chapter once again!
person Twiggies
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm here alright. xD
Hottie, awesome and funny!
Heh, really good chapter once again!

Oh noo! Somebody's following Shikamaru?
It ain't easy to be gorgeus it seems. xD

''Neji always knew when he was being stared at, and by whom, as though he had eyes all over his head.''
I really liked that line. It kinda brings Byakugan to my mind, and I guess it is supposed to. :D
They are actually very much in-character.. Shika and Neji I mean. xD

Heh, Candace. Poor woman! xDD
Very funny moment.

I hope you keep writing and udpate soon again!
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wahh! No! More more more! I need more. :) Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Twiggies
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awh, Thanks YOU! xD

Hehe, ''Neji was pillow-humping happy''
That must be REALLY happy then. xD I've read those fics too, by the way:

Really good chapter once again. :D
Everybody seems to be.. fascinated by the two. And they seems to be captivated by each other. xD
But it's no wonder. Shika and Neji are sexy as hell. xD
AND Shikamaru with Ray-Ban aviator sunglasses? Super hot! :D

I can't wait to see how the early dinner turns out.
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Really good fic.