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by Prism0467

person charmpit
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ShikaNejiShika. Always a pleasure.
person Twiggies
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I'm glad you always update so soon!

Yay for Kiba. xD
Such a bully, but I have to say a hot one.
But of course, Shika and Neji are even hotter. xD
Mmmm, I think Neji's perfect too. The looks, the brain, the power.. Lovely.

Kabuto being a good guy is good. :D
For once he is not the bad guy's puppet. xD

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
..Or should I say: I hope the story continues to write itself? xD
Anyways, really good story!
person Twiggies
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ehh? Shikamaru and threesome?
Wow, what a lucky man. xDD
And the reason why he doesn't take the medicine is revealed..
You came up with that nicely. :D A really good reason, indeed.

And Neji really must be physically powerful, he has trained very hard.
Discipline, that's the Hyuuga's way, isn't it? xD

Very interesting chapter!
It's nice to know about their ''backgrounds'' and what was/is their life like.
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love these two even more when people write them well and in tune with thier personalities within the anime and manga. Well Done!
person Twiggies
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter!
I like their jobs. xD Great AU idea.

Hehe, I love the pairing.
Meh, they both like/are attracted to each other but doesn't even know it?

Well, Nara's a genius.. His brains are working non-stop. xD
It was a good detail how Nara couldn't sleep without medication. 8D

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok that cought my attinchion. That was great! I love how you have strated this story. Please, please, PLEASE, contule it. I got to see what happens next. Great work, and update ASAP!!! ^^