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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wuagh! Why have you not continued? Please do so!
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story when is the next chaptefr going to be up
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And now Katy Perry is stuck in my head along with images of Neji, Ten-Ten and Hinata...
I think I can deal with that. Hope you update soon.
I think I can deal with that. Hope you update soon.
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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHOA! Second chapter was even hotter! More please!
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the first chapter was good, can't wait for the next
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this is so good! Finally good threesome parings and not just narusasusaku all the time!
I can't wait for nejitenhina! <3
I can't wait for nejitenhina! <3
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well... If I have to be completely honest with you, I don't like song fics. And I'm not too crazy for fics written in first person either. But strangely enough, this story caught my eye and attention (maybe it was the fact that I'm a total sucker for anything involving Tenten), and by the time I finished reading it, I didn't really care for the song or the first person narrative. It's real hard nowdays to find a story I actually enjoy, but yours seems to do the trick. Well done!
Besides from a few grammar and spelling mistakes (so few it's not even worth pointing them out), you have a rather nice writing style. I'm curious about how you'll write the next chapter.
Please update soon and don't keep me waiting too long!