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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It good to see for once that everything doesn't end perfectly in a story. It made it seem more real and naughty that they were caught.. i loved it, and you went though it great, and it didn't feel rushed! I absolutely loved it!
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so cute. I laughed at naru's comment with satan having a new worshiper. It was all around adorible.
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HA HA HA
Oh my gosh I love you LOL, that was fun, a hoot and shikes, was it HOTT!!! The pov shifted too soon at times for smooth coherency but the action was beautiful in the sense they and we the readers were completely removed from the scene until the climax - fireworks, fainting innocents and er f... you get the point LOL
Aww it's love, and am warm and gushing glee!
Oh my gosh I love you LOL, that was fun, a hoot and shikes, was it HOTT!!! The pov shifted too soon at times for smooth coherency but the action was beautiful in the sense they and we the readers were completely removed from the scene until the climax - fireworks, fainting innocents and er f... you get the point LOL
Aww it's love, and am warm and gushing glee!
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lmao. i love the ending. and yet i feel like i've read this before. at least about the part with the sex on the table and it collapsing
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG who are you?! you're awesome! do u have more stories of this type??? i LOVED LOVED this story. it took me a while to actually read it cause i was enjoying it so much but kept getting interrupted by life (silly life) but now that i'm done I MISS IT. loved the writing, the interaction with the characters, naruto's spazzy behaviour lol and of course the hotness at the end. hotness in de place!!
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i wish dessert would do that for me....lol..i loved the story
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute. :D
And pineapple upsidedown cake is awesome... I really want some and now I think about it... I don't think theres a chance in hell in Japan of finding any. :(
And pineapple upsidedown cake is awesome... I really want some and now I think about it... I don't think theres a chance in hell in Japan of finding any. :(
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are a god! This was absolutely golden. I loved it when the park bench collapsed, and Gaara's comments in the car :) Brilliant fic!
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahahahahaha! really great! great idea with the cake! i love that little part where sasuke says "what took you so long?" ^_^ but poor kiddies though lol they saw that...it should've been me xD
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done.