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for Desperation

by Jelp

person Ninja S
schedule May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the story, and I hope that you continue with it soon
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
its a good story, i like it, i hope that you finish it up as its keeping me drawn to it
person Bats
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic VERY much! I was reading some of your other fics and this one just caught my interest so i checked it out. The way you captured the characters personalities is frickin amazing! Your Hinata is DEAD on (i think so anyway) :D I never read a Naruto/Hinata before this and i just want to read more! I hope you continue to update this story, it's just too good not to! lol Have a Happy Birthday btw :)
person chococake
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please say you'll update this story! It's been so long.

This is one of the few good Naruto/Hinata stories out there. And with the garbage going on in the manga, I really could use some Naru/Hina loving.
person Snake-eat-dog
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Congrats and all that, but I could KILL for an update to THIS fic by now, I mean it, you just give me a name and a cleaver, I'll round up a whole bunch of them!

A short way of putting all that, this fic is one of the best of the best of the best, and me need more :) please?

Chiao
person nahleili
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This fic is EXCELLENT. Realistic with a twist, good length, good idea. Well written and imaginative. Please update soon! Reading this was a breath of fresh air.
person The big naru fan
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well i absolutely love this story i think it is amazing and i can not wait for the next update plz update soon i need to find out what happens.
person Killer Intent
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is great.
It really grabs and almost forces you to read it. It's incredible how easy it is to fall in love with it.
All of your insight on Hinata and her character is probably what makes the story. Naruto's not so bad himself.

I don't really see much that you can improve on when it comes to storytelling. You're better than most, I say.

I saw the picture made for one of your other stories. Was it a while ago? I bet you were ecstatic; it's incredibly well done.

Congratulations on your upcoming marriage. Best of wishes and good luck.
person seacatsd
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! This is one of my favorite stories on this site, it interesting that it's a joint project! (sort of) :)

Keep up the good work!
person statnin
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dam I loooooove this fic!

keep it up!

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