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Aww.. Naruto and Hinata are so cute together. I'm glad he stood up to her father and I enjoyed your backstory for his upbringing. ^^

Keep up the good work!

...getting better and better all the time. My fiancee and I are getting our wedding plans together now too, so let me know how you make out with yours

I have been reading this story from the start, and I must say: out of the crap, and literally barf-inducing material, probably drenching with the cesspool of disgusting bed room practices, your story shines like a jewel.

It is romantic, the sex scenes are perfectly done, and there are no blow jobs or disgusting anal-sexes (no offense if you DO write anal sex, because I am just being honest). You know what; I am relieved this story does not follow the same route as 2078686867 other stories in the AFF rotten fruit basket. Keep up the good work.

I shall be reviewing every chapter from this point forth, as you clearly deserve all the credit thrown your way. I will probably find this story on FF.

its a good chapter, well written, good flow, i look forward to the next one ^^

excellent chapter ^^, interesting kiss before the end ^^
i look forward to the next chatper, and good addition of the update schedule ^^

lol.. caught red handed!! ^^

Keep up the great work!

Awesome chapter.

Very good chapter. The stories flowed really well so far. keep up the great work. Looking forward to the interaction between Naruto and Hiashi.

Hahaha... TOO funny. And yes, I'd have to agree with poor Hinata-chan... the date was JUST getting to be really good. :) Great job!

Wow!! This was a great chapter! And I do feel sorry for Ino though, for her to actually come to like or possibly love Naruto is rather cute. I really hope that Hinata actually tells Naruto that she has loved him since she was little so he won't be left in the dark to much longer. Can't wait until the next chapter!!