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for Desperation

by Jelp

schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why people are complaining about this chapter being short... most of the chapters so far have been about this chapter's length. Anyway, this chapter was funny, and looking forward to next installment.
person Harmony
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how akward theyare.... and omg yay your updating again -squeegasms-
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Hinata for finally asking Naruto out!! (If I were Ino, I would have stuck with Naruto too after finding out how much of a catch he was. ;P)

I hope she's able to get Naruto to fall for her too. ^^
Keep up the great work and feel better!
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter ^^, though it was much later then expected, it seems like a chapter well worth the wait, hehe. great piece with the rings, and the end was quite happy, bit of a turn from the last chapter endings
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter.
person RichardH
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gah, sorry to hear about your medical issue... but you came up with a really good chapter, hope their date is smooth and happy
person RamothsLair
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really can't wait until you update this fanfic! It's really good and every time I see it's updated I stop whatever I am doing just to read it. So please update soon.
person Yoru no Chandra
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
um, hey, I hate to complain, but I've been waiting for the next chapter for, well, some weeks now - like I
m sure all of your readers have been doing. Could you PLEASE update soon? I want to know what happens next. Thanks.
P.S. sorry that I haven't reviewed before, but I don't have the internet at home and I can only go online by going to the library.
Once again, thanks. Hope you grant me an early christmas and upload the next chapter for DESPERATION.
person asdfghj
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude UPDATE!!!!!!
person RamothsLair
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the direction this story has taken! It's full of twists and turns, and is just pure enjoyment. I can't wait until you put up the next chapter, so please hurry!! Please and thank you!