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for Desperation

by Jelp

person RichardH
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First time I've been on AFF in a few days, and I see an awesome chapter added to this, 4.75/5 (Hinata's body should have responded by hitting her father, I'm just saying)
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm, i had waited the time for the latest chapter to come out, it was enjoyable, but predictable nearing the end (since i was running out of chapter lol) i questioned whether or not the wait was worth it, now, im not going to think about that question, great chapter ^^
person thas
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story. i still want to know what ino did to naruto?
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
there just may be a Hiashi v Naruto moment after all, with Hinata on the side
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.
person Saraneko
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor Hinata :( Loved the chapter, and so happy to see it updated ^^
person BlueRyuu
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i also did not expect him to react like that! kudos to you! you completely tricked me :) that was great!

:o youre killing me with the 'what was wrong with their engagement in the first place?' bit xD
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My, this is an interesting story. It's funny, yet... strange. I had the feeling throughout the fic that it was all a gag for Naruto to finally make Hinata do something and/or for Shikamaru to do the same for Ino. Or something.

Blech. Pregnancy.
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love all your fics and I can't wait til you add more to them
person avatoa
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What the heck is going on with Naruto? If you ask me, Naruto and Ino probably invented the whole engagement as a test for Hinata but had the unexpected side effect of Ino falling for him.