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This is exceptionally good.
I loved the mental image of a shocked Naruto bent over with his hands in his hair.

Ack! Great chapter!! The fear and desperation and betrayal and bitterness at the end were artistically handled! I loved Hinata's panicked nervousness and Naruto's cracked mask. Loved it!

Keep up the great work. Can't wait till Sunday. :P

interesting chapter, not how i pictured her telling him, i had thought that the confession of sex would come before the pregnancy confession, and from the end of the chapter, it seems like naruto has gained feelings for hinata, and may challenge hiashi to marry her, but i dont know, i look forward to the next installment ^^

Another wonderful chapter.
Poor Hina-chan!
And I'm happy that Naruto didn't take it as bad as I thought he would...
I think the next chapter he should probably talk to Sasuke about it.
Well wonderful chapter, I hope that you send me another email letting me know when you update!!! :)

Awesome chapter update soon.

ah, soooo goooooooddd! It was nice to see Naruto have mixed feelings about everything, makes the story that much better ^^ Anxiously awaiting the next chapter. hehe

albeit his reaction isn't so surprising, I personally don't think Naruto would have it in him to be mad at her. true it was technically rape the first time, I'm sure about 8 other people are going to break it down to him about how she has felt *sorry if I'm seeming to give you unwelcome ideas* if you need any ideas on how Hiashi should react, I have a few really good references for you, one is "Nine Tails, Two Hearts" by Ani Rayne, and the other would be my story "The Power of Youth... and Love." other then that, fantastic job on this chapter, I hope the next one comes soon.

Love it.
Would like to be updated when your story is updated.
The email is inumoon3@yahoo.com
Hope to read more soon!!

sweet sweet story. its really cute.. xD

Great! Keep up the good work, and update soon!