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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter, incredibility interesting ending of latest one, looks like the whole sceme will be revealed to naruto in the next chapter ^^
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAARRRGGGHHH!!! You... You... A cliffhanger??? PLEASE UPDATE SOON YOU ALMOST DROVE ME CRAZY WITH THIS LAST CHAPTER IT WAS ROMANTIC, TENSE, AND EXCITING ALL AT ONCE!!!! Okay breath in (inhales), breath out, (exhales) and relax... Okay I'm okay now. I can't wait to see what happens next. When Hiashi hears about this... When Tsunade hears about this.... When Ino, Sakura, or Kiba hear about this..... Oh I can't wait I can't Wait so please don't keep us in stitches...
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaahhhh! so good. So, this means that Naruto knows, right? hehe, can't wait for the next chapter
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is some serious craziness going on now. Yay, I'm finally writing a review from the computer and not my pocket PC! I can use proper punctuation!
Naruto is so damn thick, I swear. How can someone possibly be that clueless? Oh, I pray that he doesn't get mad at Hinata after all of that! She did tried telling him, but he was being the moron he CAN be! Your writing is awesome as always, but somehow I get the feeling you cut that chapter short on purpose! Now you're just being evil, I swear!
Naruto is so damn thick, I swear. How can someone possibly be that clueless? Oh, I pray that he doesn't get mad at Hinata after all of that! She did tried telling him, but he was being the moron he CAN be! Your writing is awesome as always, but somehow I get the feeling you cut that chapter short on purpose! Now you're just being evil, I swear!
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just finally finished 6 and 7. All I can say is wow. You defintely know how to keep a girl interested. lol Keep up the good writing.
~Ani
~Ani
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. The ending to this chapter just left me wanting moar. Please keep it up.
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, and I can't wait to see what happens next, but your cliffhangers are brutal, you can't just put that in the story and then end it. Cruel.
Update soon, please!!!
Update soon, please!!!
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor, clueness Naruto. He always has a way of making stories like these more interesting.
Nice work. Update soon.
Nice work. Update soon.
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice, pretty good twist there at the end, seems it will end badly in the next chapter, i look forward to it ^^