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for Desperation

by Jelp

schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i figured this might be the best way to get a hold of you. i think someone else plagiarized "nameless desires". it is just the plot and not word for word, but that's bad enough because they didn't rewrite it very well. it is a fic called "all the while" on tokiohotelfiction.com if you would like to check it out for yourself. i'm waiting to see if i get a response from the author before i report it to the mods, but you are welcome to do as you wish seeing as it's your story and all. sorry that people are jerks. :(
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay let me get this straight, Hinata takes Naruto's virginity and her own two weeks ago and since then he has dreams of being with Hinata? Yup the manga's right he is a idiot genius of hard work!!! Okay please tell me that in the morning Naruto's going to wake up with Hinata in bed with him? Heck the reaction alone would be worht it you know? Still I love this story so far and I'm still hoping for Hinata and Naruto you know? Keep up the great work.
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are officially evil. That's it. I think I just had a heart attack with that chapter. But I still love this story! Man, and I thought I was the queen of cliff hangers!
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe... He's totally going to instigate this one and man will he be confused when he finds Hinata still by his bedside in the morning. hhehehehe >:) yay!


Keep up the great work!
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe... He's totally going to instigate this one and man will he be confused when he finds Hinata still by his bedside in the morning. hhehehehe >:) yay!


Keep up the great work!
person thas
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i get that naruto is marrying ino. i get that hinata molested naruto but why, is it ever going to be explained, you seem to be getting side tracked into the hinata/naruto love thing. is ino using her mind techniques on naruto and if she is why. did she get knocked up from another partn er and that person decided not to take responsiblity or what.
person Saraneko
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEEE! I love it so much ^^ I can't wait for the next chap...perhaps another Naruto/Hinata lemon?
person videogameguy10
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story keeps getting better. Please keep it up.
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.