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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, this chapter is such a tease! Hooray For cups! I mean cubs! I already wish it was Sunday all over again!
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Update soon!
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm.. Naruto's seeking HER out now?? I wonder what that will lead to? Maybe Naruto's trying to return a little "dream sex" of his own. ;) hehehe
(Shhh.. if we pretend this is a dream it doesn't count as cheating, right?) =^^=
Keep up the good work!
(Shhh.. if we pretend this is a dream it doesn't count as cheating, right?) =^^=
Keep up the good work!
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was thinking the whole time that Hinata was going to snap from the way they were going on about Naruto and even her own crush toward him, almost like they didn't care a single whit.
Well, snap, again. Only this time with bloody results instead of sticky ones :p I would've liked that to happen though, hahaha o.o
Maaaan, I need more of this. More please, and speedy-like, ne?
Big bloody grins,
Chiao
Well, snap, again. Only this time with bloody results instead of sticky ones :p I would've liked that to happen though, hahaha o.o
Maaaan, I need more of this. More please, and speedy-like, ne?
Big bloody grins,
Chiao
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Hinata, Ino and Sakura are going to the Hokage Tower to learn more about Naruto's past huh? I wonder how they are going to feel about it being top secret? Not only cause of Kyuubi but because of who his mom and dad was. Plus their is probably alot more things in his past that they don't know about (probably ALOT of bad things) especially how the villagers treated him. The next chapter might have me crying so here hoping for Hinata's sake... Keep up the great work.
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ino and Sakura are such a wacky pair. Although they are random enough that its truly a believable relationship. They are both so harsh to one another that neither takes it seriously, although Hinata is caught way off guard from their callousness. ^^
Great chapter. Keep up the good work! (Although I am excited now to realize that the idea of them knowing about the Kyuubi seems not so likely. Makes for a much more fun reveal.)
Great chapter. Keep up the good work! (Although I am excited now to realize that the idea of them knowing about the Kyuubi seems not so likely. Makes for a much more fun reveal.)
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the voices are your friends. hinata you should reslly let them out to play. listen to the voices hinata.
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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i usually don't like Hinata/Naruto stories but this one seems ok
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
was a good chappy but try making them a bit longer and hinata less stupid i think.... lol ... i mean she is shy and all but she almost giving up herself by apologies... i dont see that... she is more submissive too ..
i hope you dont mind i said all that... it is up to you if you well take that into consideration
i hope you dont mind i said all that... it is up to you if you well take that into consideration
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Why are they getting married?? Ino's trying to pry into his past, which does show she cares.. but it makes me wonder if any of them even know about the fox sealed within him or if he's still keeping it a secret. I'm in agreement with Sasuke that there is something fishy going on. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!