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yay perfect ending

That was a funny ending but Hot and Delicious!!! I just love their romance.XD

It's cute, I like it. Just a couple errors. No biggy. Like the AN before the story.

dessert: treat eatened after a meal

desert: hot place with lotta sand

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WOW!!! That was scary and exciting!! I'm so glad they got to Naruto and Kyuubi got to confront Orochimaro.:)

Awww, Kyuubi is so shy and uncertain about his feelings for Itachi that's just so Kawaiiiii.XD Now Itachi can also recieve some love since he's changed a bit too.

Yaaaay!!!! I'm so happy that they will be together forever and without anymore punishment. All is right with the world.:) Now Itachi and Kyuubi can get closer and start anew together.XD

love it keep up the good work ne!

You had written that Naruto had been watching Sasuke his whole life. But when he gets to earth you have him acting like a retard and he doesn't know human interaction and he doesn't know what alcohol is and he lets people take him away from Sasuke. Then Sasuke after letting Naruto get almost raped, after letting Gaara kiss him, after having tenten get him drunk (all of these things happened when he let Naruto out of his site); why would he let Naruto out of his sight again_only to let Itachi take him_not a very smart Sasuke. I'm assuming you're going to have Naruto throw up all over Itachi--that's the only thing that will make the ending of this chapter and the beginning of the next worthwhile. This story is a really cute idea but the execution is

haha Kyuubi and Itachi awesome!!
so now both Naruto and his brother are human, thats good. better then being executed, thats for sure.
i'll be waiting patiently for the next chappie.

reminds me of that 1987 film: Date With An Angel. I loved that film.
I am liking this story! :D