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for Becoming a Slave

by zanax

person QueenofQuill
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it's QueenofQuill again. I just read my own review and I said sasuke seme when I meant sasuke uke. Sorry. There are too many sasuke seme stories around and the sasuke uke owns that are around usually turn sasuke into a quivering mess. this onw doesn't it stays true to the characters and I hope I see some more of it soon.
person QueenofQuill
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohh please write more of this, I just love sasuke seme stories but not ones where sasuke comes out of character. In this we can clearly see that sasuke is the same person but I still see him as an uke. I mean in the manga he lets himself get manipulated and used and it is a true fact that people who are authoritive in real life are submissive in the bedroom because it's taking a wait off their shoulder and giving them relise.

Please update soon.

Best wishes QueenofQuill
person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First of all I want to say that this story is brilliant and so good. Please keep updating I can't wait for more;)

I have to say that Sasuke didn't deserve so much from Naruto. I mean, Sasuke would never be so cruel and Naruto is and most of all Naruto is embarassing him and taking his pride. Sasuke maybe insulted him but never took Naruto's pride. It is just no fair and I think it is too much from Naruto. What is wrong with him that he has so much against Sasuke?

Please I want to see what will happen next:) Please update it already:) You are so good writer.
person LadyWolf
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!!!!! MORE!!!!

This is getting good! I always said that that all Sasuke needed was a good spankin'!
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love this story! It's so hot. Sasuke as Naruto's bitch is the best. Yum! *blush* I look forward to the rest of the story. Keep up the good work!
person Hello Mitty
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So out of character. I don't like it.
person SangoStar
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I've read Hestia's D/s naruto about 3 times and you're story is just as good. Keep up the great work, I can't wait for Sasuke being punished on stage. ~SangoStar
person Raholea
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sadistically cruel.... spankings in front of the whole club, nice one. especially with the fact that Sasuke doesn't want to truly break down and submit. I'm really liking your Naruto here

Eager to see whats in store for the next chapter. *hugs* and good luck with whatever you have planned.
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn... I feel sorry for Sasuke....
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He deserves that.