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i love this pairing!!! omg like you don't even know and i think you might be one of the few authors who can actually write!!!

Ahhh...good stuff.

yea but i wonder who regreted that more, minato or the anbu....my bets are on minato, what with the energy and the property damage and such...yeah. i'd've hated to be that kids nanny. *shudders* so happy to hear that you're updating original sin! ah, i did the dance of happiness. i gotta say, it's about time *pouts, shakes finger at you* and i hope it will be as great and amazingly fantastic as the others. cheers to you and birthday blessings on your friend. ja ne. Meli-chan.

*dies laughing* Owl-san's in trooooouuuuble!


I love it!

I take it back; ch. 9 is my favorite now. Naruto is sooooo cute in this one, and I think it's also very true to you fic how *intense* he can be when he gets a notion in his head. And I have to admire the patience of the Owl in the closet. Seriously, six+ hours in a cramped space is bad enough, but I've watched enough horror movies to be wigged out by little kids acting strange-and Naruto's already demon-possessed. And then he opens the door and starts talking about ghosts . . . O_O Be afraid of little children that act omniscient. Trust me, I work in a daycare. I know these things.

But I digress. Excellent work, and I hope to see more soon, in either this or Original Sin-trust me, I know how awful writer's block can be. It took me over a month to get my last chapter out, and I thought people were going to lynch me. >_<

that last chapter was great! ghosts! hah! you tell 'em naru! i love this little collage of daily life with naru, and i think it sets up a great background for minato and naruto's future....but....i gotta be a total butt and ask when the next chapter of original sin is coming out. this is pretty much the only decent mina/naru fic i can find (and it rocks to the umpteenth degree, believe me) and i'm getting fidgetty. pretty please the next chapter soon? but back to my review, i love how the ANBU was locked in the closet all day and didn't even kno that naru knew he was there. that naru is one amazing little kid. you are the best and i love you and all of those other regulation reviewer accolades you deserve (you *do* deserve them). keep it up. love and peace. ja ne. Meli-chan.

This was so freaking cute! Though not about our sexy blond duo, I loved this one just as much if not more than the others, the idea for this one was brilliant!

Yea! An update! That was funny. I enjoyed Naruto's description of the "ghosts" and I can't believe he stayed watching the closet so intently for all those hours.^_^ The last line was ominous sounding.

Looking forward to your next update,

Kismet

"Is there a ghost inn in the attic?"... Now that line blew me up laughing like mad,and i can picture the poor anbu trying to grasp the meaning behind a 4 years old kid and laughing himself silly,like the one under the bed.This is so good and they chose so funny places to hide them self,though its odd...they cut out the surveillance once naruto was old enough to become a shinobi,right?
^^ very,verrry nice as alway darling ^^
ja ne

LOL... man i could totally see that happening... Poor anbu. being outsmarted y a 4 year old :)