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Nice. I liked these drabbles. Insights on their feelings and frustrations and also seeing Naruto's interaction with Team 7. Can't wait for more. ^^

I loved loved *loved* Ch. 8! 'Reverie' was just the funniest thing in the world, when set in the timeline, just *knowing* that Minato's inevitably going to be pushed(shoved) down that road! I love your writing altogether-and especially the way you write the characters-and I can't wait to see what you come up with next, either with this or Original Sin. Keep up the fantastic work!

-Dina

oh! I know this word doesn't exist but this chapter was scorchinnocent!!!! jajaja^^ scorching hot in its "innocence"
And just for you to know,you update I leave a review, no matter what story you put up!!
ja ne

MORE! MORE! i demand more! and PLEASE update original sin! soon, please. i understand plot development and background set-up, but please? i love minato as you've written him, and the quieter, somehow more sai-ish naruto is just too huggably cute! please update soon, because this story just makes me smile and sigh wistfully as dozens of could-have-beens dance around the edge of my consciousness. good job, and many more accolades to your work and thought processes. peace and love. Meli-chan.

Oh! I don't get it very well...sorry! Is he implying that he is a narcissist himself? because,Minato is like his reflection but older,or maybe it is more adequate to say that he is Minato's image? but younger and he can say that hes in love with himself?...man,aren't you complicated! ^^ maybe am just dense though!
Anyways,thanks for the update,i really don't know why,but your style is one of the best out here in terms of minatoXnaruto.And am not just being nice,its the gospel truth O_o
bye^^

So very awesome! Your writing is amazing and I can't wait to read more! Thank you for this chapter!

Oh no! not silly!never silly,but fairly complex from my point of view.The most ludicrous thoughts actually guide us sometimes through the right way or decisions. I know rambling alert! but I was hoping for an update,and I got it,so thanks^^

These are nice drabbles, I think my favorite one so far is Ghost.

So sad...He saw the ghost? or am I to dense to understand a metaphor? yeah...it may be the last,am to dense.Its ok anyway if its only from Naruto point of view,its very good anyway,so happy that you're happy
bye^^

I like it. its an interesting perspective. Normaly I stay away from incest pairing but yours caught my eyes. its good. I like the ghost chapter it shows that as naruto was a baby when his mother was killed he really has no emotional connection to her. he was more weiry of her then anything epecially since she was haunting Minato (i'm gues that the ghost is his mother, correct me if i'm wrong), I thought it was sweet that mother or no he was strongly willed against denighing her presence in order to give Minato peace. I really like it sweet with a touch of angst.