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September 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that this story isn't abandoned...??? I just found it & was enjoying it too much to stop & check the date the story was posted.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Horrible? No way!
THis is for the first chapter by the way. Just got in this fic, and it's... Intriguing.
THis is for the first chapter by the way. Just got in this fic, and it's... Intriguing.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo... That's just mean. You know it, I know it, and you even admit it.
And to say that you were scared we'd hate it at first...
Pffff...
Well... I suppose the cliffhanger thing has it's purpose. I. Want. The. Next. Chapter.
XD I suppose that got the message across.
Reading in the first person is kind of weird... But you get used to it and stop noticing it after a while...
Well, I can't wait for the next chappie, so I hope you update soon...
XD LANE
And to say that you were scared we'd hate it at first...
Pffff...
Well... I suppose the cliffhanger thing has it's purpose. I. Want. The. Next. Chapter.
XD I suppose that got the message across.
Reading in the first person is kind of weird... But you get used to it and stop noticing it after a while...
Well, I can't wait for the next chappie, so I hope you update soon...
XD LANE
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo!!
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i looove it!!! its getting good! plz continue soon!!!
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, I love this, keep it up!
good luck with the writing.
take care. hugs
good luck with the writing.
take care. hugs
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG i luv ur ff!! really.. it's a pity that it's just a one-shot..i'm sure it would be a great begin 4 a longer story. aaanyway i like it, honestly!!! ^_^
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was a little bitter sweet i don't know why. it was still good and i'd love to read more of ur work
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story but I have no idea how Naruto should top in this situation.
Oh and a oneshot can't have more parts than ONE! That would be just a short story. ;-)
Oh and a oneshot can't have more parts than ONE! That would be just a short story. ;-)
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sasunaru from naruto's point of view plz :D i liked him describing how it felt to be with sasuke