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for The Bellboy

by brook13baby13

person Anon
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice, though it has a very sudden ending.
person Kirai
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was in shock to see that chapter eight was the last chapter, it makes me sad for the story was so wonderful. Even though it was not yours to begin with you still gave to it after the creator left it to die. I greatly enjoy the story and the emotional outbreaks between the characters. I hope that there will be a sequil by the name of the last chapter. That would be just so wonderful.
person hisoka
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
im kinda wondering why sasuke waited for naruto outside at all?and haku was he scared or did he sense that he should go?wonder how the resr of the band will take this,if naruto stays the night that is(just falling asleep drunk).hope you can update soon
person hellokitty4Ever!
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked bellboy alot! I like lots of her stories, but L should be the uke. Its practically written in stone. But back too bellboy... I want to know how it ends. I wasn't meant to wait. Im sure everyone can guess wht happens next, because when it was on chapter five I did. But this story kinda got me trippin... is Naruto going to be the uke or what? That to me wasn't too clear, but the angst is enough to make me wanna read again. NaruxSasu or SasuxNaru...
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Kind of funny and evil... I hope you continue!!
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cliffie=most evil invention of all time! cant wait to see it
person hisoka
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a fine kettle of fish theyre in,theyre evenly tied and have no way to get eachother.ill just sit back and watch the magic.
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol both of them are screwed!
so you're not updating anymore?? why im confused!?
but i hope you do ^_^
and Happy Holidays
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really good story
please update sooner
person hisoka
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
id hate to be apart of that band...unless i could be the plus.how can sasuke not know that hes getting what he deserves its revenge and its sweet but only for so long.whats narutos job anyway,is he like a stripper or something.sasuke gonna have to get use to his new parttime job.hope you can update soon