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Three more chapters only? :(

"Payback is a Bastard" - michelerene/lexjamandme

Update soon!

Wow, this is a really good story so far, i do hope you continue it. Don't feel you need to copy this author's style or anything, write it however you want and i'm sure it'll be very good, i haven't read anything you've written so i don't really know how you write ^^;

I want to see naruto dom sasuke and get his revenge :P
But sasuke's not a willing sub either, so naruto will have his work cut out for him XD
Or have naruto make sasuke strip at that Boys Boys Boys place :P
I'm betting sasuke's a virgin too ~_^
*sigh* there's just never enough sasuke uke stories XD

Hey this is a really fun story , I hope that you decide to continue it. After reading some of your earlier stuff then this, WOW, i mean really..just..WOW. I would love to know your secret, what helped you improve so much? I see you have a LOT of stuff written so it must be the practice practice practice method or something. What ever you did it really worked, bravo. Your most resent stories are phenomenal.

AHHH i want to read more.

oh ga, he landed in so much barf thats so sick.vomit smells so bad and to sit in it and let it seep through your clothes...not so plesent.sasukes such a dick i want breakfast but we have no bacon!one kiss for all he knows naruto thinks hes still in some odd way drunk,thats what happens when you drink the expensive shit in hotel friges.hope you can update soon

sasuke already wants him,wonder how naruto would take to that knowledge.i mean who drinks like that when the bellboy is off.so wait is naruto wearing the necklace he stole from sasuke?and whats narutos second job(that Boys Boys Boys strip club,or somewere near?).well hope you can update soon

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

ha beaten up by prostitutes thats something to see and i really thought he had someone watching his back constantly,why would naruto take something in the first place?wonder what his punishment will be and how he finds out sasukes secret.hope you can update soon

I remember this story and I had wondered what had happened to it, I hand't heard from him in a long long time. As far as who bete'ed the first three chapters...that would me. I'm glad that it is being continued though because it is a good fic...good luck and I will keep an eye out to see what you've done with it.

Cai