rate_review Reviews

As red-hott as Tenten's dress. Goddamn! How are you so good at writing lemons? I was so happy to see this updated. I love the way you write, the descriptions and the way you weave the bits of plot and explanation into the story. It's too bad it's complete, I'd love to see how they go on in the apartment, but then I guess I get to look forward to "Only Training"

I'm loving this. They are so hot together.
Rox

You need to ask?


YES!

I'm thinking this should be a two shot?

Oh, hell Yeah! What a hot scene! More chapters please! It would be nice if this had a storyline, but if it doesn't, that's allright.

Concrit time! I noticed one or two little mistakes around your story (you wrote a 'flying fuck'... maybe you meant a 'fling fuck'?) Other than that, it was awesome!