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for My Boy Next Door

by TheSimi

person hisoka
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kakashis planning something and sais in on it,i really hope he doesnt rape naruto i mean being beaten up is fine but god you can get over the shame of rape.what is or was sasukes plan i gather that it revolved mostly or at least abit around naruto if he gets so pissed that hes out.why would you fallow one of his fuckbuddies?some people some people.hope you can update soon
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whats the plan?! Please update soon! I cant wait!
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story! I think Sasuke's plan is to seduce Naruto I don't belive he want to hurt or use him. Update as fast as u can!
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I like the concept for this story. Makes me wonder how good the manga is that you got it from. I like a flustered Naruto and a perverted Sasuke. I'll be sure to check for your next chapter. ^_^

~Kismet
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm what is his plan...update soon please..I really love this story
person mikepd87
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter down and i still want more...i wonder wat Sasukes up 2...now that i got his fanfict 2 read i almost wanna stop written my own...
person hisoka
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so hes planning to wait like in the dark in the doorway like a pissed wife waiting for her adsent husband from an important affair or just a family dinner?wow sasuke keeps freaks around him,and not the cool types either just the freaks that you dont talk too cuz it either looks bad towards you or they smell funny.what is sasuke planning is he planning to use naruto?hope you can update soon
person Valkyrie612
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow Kakashi really is a freak in this story...But I like it! Poor Naru last chapter he was chased by penisbooks (I just can't let those go) and this chapter he met the perverts from hell. Is Sasuke really with them? I don't know what Sasukes plan is but I hope that he's not just using Naru. My only complaint about this chapter was that Sasuke wasn't in it enough. Plz update soon! :)
person Mickii
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is full of draMa. Got me cracking up when I read most the advance boys were gay haha. Can't wait to see Naruto showing up in the advance department again. Update soon ^^
person blur
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lolz~~~ Chpt 2 is even nicer! ^_^ but i wonder who is the black hair gyuy.