rate_review Reviews

That was a sweet ending. Good job!

For your first time - its more than acceptable. For someone who isn't even a native English speaker, its phenomenal! Its short, but I like what you did with the characters. Personally, my favorite part was the fact that after Naruto sheds his mask to reveal his inner self, the villagers suddenly flip their opinions of him and he conversely no longer wants anything to do with them. Its a great change in the dynamics between Naruto's need for acknowledgment and his lack of caring anymore. Always too little to late, eh?

Anyway, keep up the great work. I look forward to future fics from you. ^^

It was very good for a first! I actually wanted to know more! About how everything came to be the way it was! If you feel up to it you could turn this into a longer more thought out piece of work...But that's just a suggestion, otherwise it was great! -Ja

I agree, for your first story this was very good. I couldve kept reading more of it actually.
I like how they have both dropped their 'masks' and are finally being themselves...together.
I also agree that there is not enough ItaNaru stories out there..i'm always on the lookout for more.


P.S. Thank you for not putting Naruto in that hideous orange jumpsuit. I despise that thing O_O