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for Her Majesty's Kiba

by ShouraiChan

person Labbess
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kawaiiiii!!! You could really stop it right there! (I wouldn't want you to, but you coouuulllddd... XD) So cute! I loved Kiba's protective attitude! =3 Ahh, you really scared me with the almost NaruHina moments! D8< That's not very nice! Good job, all the same! ^_^
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, she's back and the rumor is not true. Naruto is a man of his word. Love the chapter. Update soon.
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how many years will pass before Hinata will come back? Will she be okay or will that mean she'll come back as a new person? I really like the ending scene with Kiba and Naruto talking, I'm glad this situation with Hinata didn't ruin their friendship. I don't know what would happen if the situation was different. I hope your update will be soon because the sooner we, as readers, will know the outcome of our favorite couple.
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great two chapters and you updated so quick too. I love where this is going and can't wait for the next updates.
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love your story. Not only because it's good but also because it is a Hinata/Kiba pairing, and not much of those are written here. I'm glad to see others, if only just a few, are writing some stories of this pairing. Yours happens to be one of few of my favorites. I wish I could put you under my favorites like ff.net but aff doesn't have that here. One thing they do have is rating and I'm glad they give us the chance to rate other stories, being fair or unfair as it may be. Anyway, great story and I hope you continue it and update it soon. I can't wait to read more.

DowntownWoman aka Tisha.
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That Was The Sweetest Thing I've EVER Read.More...More!I Mean You Should Include More Chapters.How They Grew Up And What Happened.Lovely. ^^
person sarge
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please make the reversal of your story Unfaithful(Based On The Song By Rihana)with Sakura cheating on Sasuke with Naruto or add another chapter to it but make it a little bit longer and detailed especially the lemon/sex scene