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for (Wo)man of my life!

by ednama

person Anon
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, darn! Brilliance story! A bit of a tease, but all well. I definitely like how Naruto was trapped by the vision of Gaara's back and ultra sexy ness. ^^ Thanks for writing it!
person MeLaiya
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, Please write a sequal, I BESEACH YOOOOOUUUUUU!!!!!
person archaicrose
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's finished! I'm so happy! *wipes away a tear* And what a great ending. A splash of drama, the inevitable confrontation, and a sweet hint of the romance sure to blossom beyond the reader's eyes. (I think I get way too involved in these stories.)

Hmm? What's that? Do I smell a related series of one-shots? hehe. I kid.

Anyway.

I'd be happier if I got a gold star, but alas, the reference eludes me. However, knowing Inner Obstacle is next on the list of importance more than makes up for it. Keep it up! We're all cheering for you!
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh you just suck how can you just leave it there? I was just getting into your plot and then bam!!! to be continued update soon luv your work!
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *weeps in sorrow so hurtful it is like dry ice on the brain* you stopped......*sniffle sniffle* I love garaa's panties update soon please? pretty please with dress wearing garaa on top?
person Turacy Nage
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the story is is really good, i can't wait to find out Gaara reaction to Naruto now that they are face to face after the party. More interestingly Naruto's reaction, nice chaps.
person AiSene
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I clicked this on a whim while surfing but I'm really glad I did! The AU is interesting and the set-up is really funny~ |I think the Gaara chapter was the strongest, how you fit in all those sly canon details and the Temari parts never failed to make me laugh~

I hope you update soon and I do quite hope you finish that sequel :3
person LadyPiro
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I wasn't watching and that cliffhanger just came out of nowhere! It was at least an 80 ft drop back to reality. Now, not only should you update, you should also pay my hospital bill :D
person archaicrose
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
--“Try to manhandle me one more time, punk, and I’ll crush you!”
Naruto felt two happy tears slide out of his eyes. She was perfect.--

*cackles*

I love it! I can't wait for the final chapter. Hurry! Hurry!
person MiraMira
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off, lemme just thank you for e-mailing me about the update, it was much appreciated XD Now for the review:


Noooo~!! Only one more chapter?! *sobs uncontrollably in a dark, Uchiha-like corner* I nee~d this fic! Please don't take it away from me TT-TT



*most definitely votes for a sequel*