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by CrisNoWait

schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha okay to begin with i never really like Sasuke ... and your fic is making me like him less ... and Iruka, and kakashi and even Tsuande ... though where is Sakure? And i love Kimimaro!
person Amaya
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I loved it!!! XD This is the first Yaoi fanfic of ShinoXNaru that I've ever read, and it's the only one that ever made me cry!!! the plot line was twisty and well developed, and the characters leaped off the screen!!! I love it!!! XDDD
person shisuta
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*poke* hehe I just had to pop in and tell you I love you. I read this story, yet again, and just had to tell you, yet again, how much I loved it. Keep up the good work babe! *chu*
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i read the entire story this was great. this could have been a great book lol. i loved the ending it did shed alot of light on some stuff.
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story.
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wooo!!! So many awesome things!! Although I must comment on the most recent assassination attempt on Iruka and Kakashi!! Holy crap! That would have been a devastating blow. I'm glad Neji was there to help.

Also, Shino's flashback (god, how many chapters back was that?) to Kune-te's "innocent" questions was such a revelation. The man certainly does plan ahead. Anything thats done for the greater good, so to speak, always leaves me weary. There's a lot of crazy shit going on right now and sooner or later its all going to come to a head.

Tomorrow is officially November. Good luck with NaNoWriMo!! =^^= Keep up the great work!
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
[omg!! I just finished reading chapter 49 and am thrilled with the excitement of Haku making Sasuke into his uke!! ^^ heheheh I did not see that coming but I am soooooo totally for it. I love Sasuke as the uke. He so needs to be put in his place. hehehehhee]

=^^= (yay!)
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy fuck! I go away for a week and you've updated like 20+ chapters??!! O_O


You may have to wait a bit for me to catch up, but I look forward to reading all of this! :D
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy fuck! I go away for a week and you've updated like 20+ chapters??!! O_O


You may have to wait a bit for me to catch up, but I look forward to reading all of this! :D
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I've been busy, so its been a while since I got a chance to sit down and read this and catch up with the story. So I'm reading, and as I'm reading I'm thinking about all the things I wanted to comment on... you know, things like Shino's excitement about finding out about Naruto's literary accomplishments, the fact they finally got together, Haku... then I got to the final chapter..

HOLY SHIT!! Kuni-te totally mutilated Kabuto!!! ((O_O)) Plus - moth egg explosions!!!! Gah! Everything thing about this chapter was out of control!! Total craziness!!! As I said before... HOLY SHIT!!

Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^