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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol... why would you think I was disappointed? I was only curious as to where this story stood in regards to timeline. Obviously its not following the canon, but to what degree? ^^
Great chapter. (As always.) Neji finally backed off from Sasuke! Yikes! Although the new Neji/Gaara development is interesting. hehehe Keep up the great work!
Great chapter. (As always.) Neji finally backed off from Sasuke! Yikes! Although the new Neji/Gaara development is interesting. hehehe Keep up the great work!
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeee! Hooray for the sand siblings!! ^^ I've always loved Gaara and Temari. ^^
Just one quick question. This story takes place before the chuunin exams. I've only just realized that Tsunande is the Hokage in this. She doesn't appear until after the chuunin exams. :P I have no problem over looking that. I just thought about it and wanted to point it out. Actually, I'm kinda looking forward to Gaara and Naruto's reactions of each other now. It was always such a great moment in the manga/anime when Naruto first realizes the look in Gaara's eyes is a reflection of his own, prior to gaining friends and being accepted by acquaintances. I'd like to see a similar moment happen here in this story too. It will definitely be interesting. Gaara's already making notices of Shino's behaviors that are similar to his own. I wonder if he's going to try to steal Naruto from our favorite bug ninja too. (You know, as sort of a "I want to feel how the blonde's making him feel" kind of remedy. lol)
Keep up the great work! Excellent job on the chapter (as always.) ^^
Just one quick question. This story takes place before the chuunin exams. I've only just realized that Tsunande is the Hokage in this. She doesn't appear until after the chuunin exams. :P I have no problem over looking that. I just thought about it and wanted to point it out. Actually, I'm kinda looking forward to Gaara and Naruto's reactions of each other now. It was always such a great moment in the manga/anime when Naruto first realizes the look in Gaara's eyes is a reflection of his own, prior to gaining friends and being accepted by acquaintances. I'd like to see a similar moment happen here in this story too. It will definitely be interesting. Gaara's already making notices of Shino's behaviors that are similar to his own. I wonder if he's going to try to steal Naruto from our favorite bug ninja too. (You know, as sort of a "I want to feel how the blonde's making him feel" kind of remedy. lol)
Keep up the great work! Excellent job on the chapter (as always.) ^^
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa.. two chapters!!!
First off: another Ibiki/Kimi pairing... is this, like, totally turning into the sexiest crack pairing ever?? holy crap!~
Secondly: The mission fight was pretty freaking awesome. The rubber headed ninja was a pretty wicked idea. At first I thought with the wind that maybe it was Temari, but no! Where the hell did Neji come from, though? Can't wait for your next chapter.
=^^= Keep up the great work!
First off: another Ibiki/Kimi pairing... is this, like, totally turning into the sexiest crack pairing ever?? holy crap!~
Secondly: The mission fight was pretty freaking awesome. The rubber headed ninja was a pretty wicked idea. At first I thought with the wind that maybe it was Temari, but no! Where the hell did Neji come from, though? Can't wait for your next chapter.
=^^= Keep up the great work!
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! Glad you got some reviews. ^^ (Well deserved, mind you.)
Yay for Naruto playing the hero again! I hope this does not make an enemy out of Kuni-te for him. Keep up the great work!
Yay for Naruto playing the hero again! I hope this does not make an enemy out of Kuni-te for him. Keep up the great work!
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! what a pair! i would not have thought that in a million years! Good call! Ohhhhhhhh so good!
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KimimaruXIbiki x_X oh my!!! (hehehehe)
Great chapter. Keep up the good work. ^^
Great chapter. Keep up the good work. ^^
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wish i had Ibiki in my bed! wow what a man! i wonder how sasuke is going to react when he finds out that naruto has had some good lovin' with shino? i can't wait to find out!!!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol, well with over 1000 hits, I think its safe to say I'm not the only one reading this. :P
Anyway, I'm glad everything worked out between Shino and Naruto. Shit, I need to learn lessons from Naruto's example and not hide things that happen that were never my fault to begin with. Hmm... Though I suppose thats not really relevant for a comment review. Bleh! Back to the subject at hand: Great chapter! Keep up the good work!
Anyway, I'm glad everything worked out between Shino and Naruto. Shit, I need to learn lessons from Naruto's example and not hide things that happen that were never my fault to begin with. Hmm... Though I suppose thats not really relevant for a comment review. Bleh! Back to the subject at hand: Great chapter! Keep up the good work!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it, confused me in the begining. I am eager to see where it goes. Any chance of an Mpreg? Please!!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story and I rate EVERYTIME I read a chapter. I review less because my vision is getting really bad and seeing the keyboard is tricky, but just know, I am still waiting for every update.