rate_review Reviews

as we all know this story is awesome! I have one comment to make....a lot of writers will update quickly with not so great 'chapters'. you on the other hand, are updating super fast with well written 'chapters' that are so jam packed with details it's amazing. your characters are well portrayed with your story line and my personal opinion....you are one excellent writer! thanks so much!

Gah!! Sasuke is so evil!!!! >_< Then again.. so is Neji!!

Kakashi is aware now so thats one more person against the hateful Uchiha. (hehehe) I hope Shino can get over hearing Naruto's "confession." He sounded like he wanted to hate Naruto now, as well! O_O
Keep up the great work!

Gaaahhhh!!! Wha- NO!!! YOU CAN'T END THE CHAPTER THERE!!! EVIL!!! OMG! I'm going to have to wait until tomorrow night now to find out what happens??? ((o_o)) Holy crap~!~~!!


This... you.. .gah!

Thats it. Damn you. I need this next update like an addict needs crack! Friggen evil, man. You're going to force me to draw you fan art now, you realize this? Evil.

FIrst of all -- Holy crap! You updated back to back! I read one, reveiwed, then there was a second one waiting for me, almost like magic! Holy freaking crap!


Secondly, he's going to be paired with both Sasuke and Naruto, isn't he? >:) bwhahahahaha. I stick by my accusations of evilness from you, but now limit that appraisal only to your characters. hehehe Thanks for the quick update. Keep up the great work!~

Whoa!!! Neji's bottoming for Sasuke?? o_O!! Totally unexpected!!! :D


I must have missed the last update but damn, thems was some awesome-ass chapters!! ^^ hehehe I wonder what demands Naruto or Shino will ask for (I hope its kisses!! eee!!) Its was also cool to see how well Neji can read Sasuke and how they are using each other. Sometimes I forget that before the Chunin exams Neji was a total prick with a hatred for his cousin. ha!


Keep up the great work!

I don't know if you intended it as a pun or not, but in Japanese "Shi" can mean death. So while "Shi" would be a shortened form of Shino, it could also indicate something darker, which would make for a nice ironic nick name since Naruto is now Tenshi. ;) "Angel and Death." Cute. Though I doubt you might have ment it like that. Doesn't quite sound like a charming pet name.

Anyway, great chapter! Shino and Naruto finally getting together was pretty freaking hot. =^^= Naruto may have staved off Sasuke's death sentence for now, but I'm sure that temporary pardon will be wavered once Shino discovers Sasuke's rape of his beloved. Keep up the great work!



(Although I must say I find it odd that I seem to be the only one reviewing this story. Its too good for there to be this much of a lack of response. My only suggestion to you to gain greater readership would be to alter the story summary just a tad. The currently summary is just slightly too vague and I'm sure if you listed it with, I dunno, a few Shino/Naru, Sasu/Naru, Kaka/Iru, Sasu/Neji tags you might bump the readership. Just a suggestion. I've read pure crap on this site that had more hits than you and its totally unjustified. Consider it. :P)

Who indeed? ;)

!!!! Bastard Sasuke!!!


Evil evil evil evil. Now Naruto's going to return and wonder why Shino's so cold. :(
We need to plot revenge!!!!

Keep up the good work! ^^

Nah, I just check to see. I was actually home all weekend with nothing to do but work on my comic and some other photoshop projects, so I ended up checking this site several times throughout the day. Honestly, I'm surprised you don't have more comments than you do for this story. =^^=


Anyway, about the update.. Chapter 10 was freaking awesome. I loved the way Naruto went all fox on the Uchiha. Kimimaru was great and the bathroom scene was incredible. Sasuke just doesn't learn, does he?

I put some links in your thread. ^^



Kiba giving sex advice?? Ha! Although I wonder if Shino will run into his blonde in the town with the hotsprings? Maybe he'll feel the explosive chakara and investigate? 0:) hehehe

Keep up the good work. ^^