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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! A nice little post-work surprise. ^^ Awesome chapter. Keep up the great work!
(I'm not looking forward to the next chapter to see how Naruto reacts in the presence of Sasuke. How much will Kakashi and Iruka know is off about the two of them? I'm sure Sasuke will be smug as hell and probably want to forcefully dominate the blond again. Naruto better bare his teeth instead of hiding behind his smile if he wants to put Sasuke in his place. hehehe.)
(I'm not looking forward to the next chapter to see how Naruto reacts in the presence of Sasuke. How much will Kakashi and Iruka know is off about the two of them? I'm sure Sasuke will be smug as hell and probably want to forcefully dominate the blond again. Naruto better bare his teeth instead of hiding behind his smile if he wants to put Sasuke in his place. hehehe.)
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was a hell of a chapter!! O_O
The Naruto masturbation/rape scene was really intense. I think this marks the end of Naruto's devoted trust of Sasuke. I can't wait to see how this changes his personality.
The Kakashi/Iruka part was a huge contrast to the harsh Sasuke/Naruto pairing. I love the way it balanced it out. And no, I don't think it was too long. I think it was enough. Sex scenes only need to be as long as the event. You did a great job.
Keep up the good work!
The Naruto masturbation/rape scene was really intense. I think this marks the end of Naruto's devoted trust of Sasuke. I can't wait to see how this changes his personality.
The Kakashi/Iruka part was a huge contrast to the harsh Sasuke/Naruto pairing. I love the way it balanced it out. And no, I don't think it was too long. I think it was enough. Sex scenes only need to be as long as the event. You did a great job.
Keep up the good work!
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
W00t! I'm being stalked! >¤_¤<
Although I hope Shino sends lightning bugs after me instead of Kikai. Those creepy crawly friends of his are rather pinchy! (And while I know that fire flies aren't very stealthy, they sure are pretty! ^^)
Thanks for the shout out. Keep up the good work!
Although I hope Shino sends lightning bugs after me instead of Kikai. Those creepy crawly friends of his are rather pinchy! (And while I know that fire flies aren't very stealthy, they sure are pretty! ^^)
Thanks for the shout out. Keep up the good work!
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story however you seemed to make naruto a bit freindless - and even more naive than normal - but the shino stalking i love - look forward to the next part
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Its so cute the way you have Shino plotting a million difference scenarios in his head about how he will get Naruto to notice him, only to have Naruto do it for him.. =^^=
Keep up the good work. :D
Keep up the good work. :D
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I wasn't expecting Naruto to get into the middle of a fight against his, well, not "friends." Meh. This was an excellent chapter, btw. Keep up the great work
(Sasuke is such an ass.)
(Sasuke is such an ass.)
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Applause.....I love this story! I am reading more stories with different pairs than the usual Sasuke/Naruto, and I must say, I am very pleased with some of them. This one especially!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooooooohhhh~
I like the Shino/Naruto pairing, but so damn hard to find
hope you writing this fic ^__^
I like the Shino/Naruto pairing, but so damn hard to find
hope you writing this fic ^__^
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is impressively good. I love that you started in in child hood and added so many unique elements the story. A Naruto/Sasuke rival prior to the Uchiha massacre. A Shino/Sasuke rivalry. Naruto's erratic childhood with sparse school attendance. Inner clan workings with interesting original characters. Plus a tie for Shino to have a loss along with Sasuke from the same massacre! That was crazy brilliant.
I absolutely loved this story. Keep up the great work!
I absolutely loved this story. Keep up the great work!
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there.
Since your email is hidden, this was the only way for me to come in contact with you. I checked aarinfantasy.net... and found myself slightly confused when a crappy searchengine popped up. And I've been out on aarinfantasy.com before... sure, that site is about anime but uhm... fanfics? I'd love to post my stuff on more sites, especially since I've had a few problems with plagiarists but I'm not sure about this.
Either way... thanks for a great review.
~Neko Izumi
Since your email is hidden, this was the only way for me to come in contact with you. I checked aarinfantasy.net... and found myself slightly confused when a crappy searchengine popped up. And I've been out on aarinfantasy.com before... sure, that site is about anime but uhm... fanfics? I'd love to post my stuff on more sites, especially since I've had a few problems with plagiarists but I'm not sure about this.
Either way... thanks for a great review.
~Neko Izumi