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this is such an amazing story! please update sooner!
i was really surprised with the last chapter!
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I can't believe no one said this before but I actually feel really sorry for Okibi-kun...the poor little kid is the only one who is completely innocent and has nothing to do with the whole thing ....and is probably going to suffer for the consequences anyway...

I usually don't even start reading stories with m-preg in them because....well... I really don't like it...but you managed to catch me with it..XD I think this story is Incredible..even though I don't think it's part of Naruto's personality to put his and sasuke's son in the middle of this revenge that is probably not going to be good on either part...And I don’t see him intentionally trying to hurt such a neutral part of this whole thing like Okibi-kun is..heh…he is probably the character who I sympathize the most in this story for now..I just don't see naruto not including the pain his own son might go through in his plan for revenge after knowing all it did to Sasuke in his childhood..I think he's way too caring and warm for that..bleh..XD..I mean..that’s just my point of view..

I like Sasuke's relationship with his son. I like it that he’s actually a good father even if he did make mistakes he’s starting to pay for..I think I’ll probably sympathize with him too later on...XD I would love to see Naruto's relationship with Ryuu too!! we don't get to see that as much..

...anyways..I loved it!I think this'll be an Awesome story..! I'll be waiting for the next update! Great work so far..!!

i loved it!the surprise ending was great!you had me hooked and i liked it.will there be more?i hope so.i loved the whole revenge thing!

No offense but I saw the whole Naruto pregnant thing in the second chapter. However I thought that Naruto had henged himself throughout the pregnancy and that his wife was a henged clone who conveniently disapeared after the baby was born. I never thought she was a real person who actually died, poor girl. That part really surprised me. I was also surprised that Naruto was still mad after all this time. That doesn't seem like Naruto to me but then again it was a refreshing change. However I really doubt Naruto would make his son hate his own brother. That part I totally don't agree with. I hope to see more to this story.

You are evil... why stop here?! Ah damn. Poor Sasuke, I kind of pity him. And poor Ino will be caught in the mess.
I can't wait to see where this story is going!
I beg you, please update soon. (And not just this story but the other one as well)

That was an AWESOME chapter!!!!!!! I'm so glad Ryuu was stronger than his younger brother because Sasuke's son with Ino was too pompous. This is getting very interesting and I can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome story and I totally LOOOOOOOVE MPREG!!!!!

ok, i had my doubts about this at first, but dang!!!! this is the best ever .. to see naruto get even with sasuke. priceless, and you're a flipping GENIUS!

This is amazing!!! please update soon!

Great story so far! Wonder how Sasuke is going to react now.

hi,

totally loved your story! loved the sadistic uzumaki and the livid uchiha! LOL!