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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hah! I knew it! I knew Naruto was pregnant. Lol... *patting myself on the back* Great chapter, Naruto's son seems to be fully aware of Sasuke, another hurdle for Sasuke to overcome. Hope it's not too easy. Thanks for sharing.
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please, please PLEASE don't stop there loool
keep writing, cuz this is amazing!!!!
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keep writing, cuz this is amazing!!!!
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i know sasuke deserves what he is getting but i can help but feel sorry for him, even if it is just a little
i think naruto deserved better but he still hes teme, naruto with sasuke produces a really cold and different naruto hehe, still LOVING this chapter!!!!!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
i think naruto deserved better but he still hes teme, naruto with sasuke produces a really cold and different naruto hehe, still LOVING this chapter!!!!!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man!!!! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THATS WHAT THE ASSWHOLE GETS!!!!^^ I love it!!! Oh yeah, DO NOT LET NARUTO GET BACK WITH SASUKE!!! LET HIM HAVE ANOTHER LOVER, MUHAHAHAHAHA!!!! NARUTO, MAKE SASUKE SUFFER!!!^^
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Blazing fire", huh? I wish I had such a cool name :P And yes it certainly suits the Uchiha bratling :D
Heh, boy I feel sorry for Yasu. She really should get hazard pay for this. Shika did you have to break up the fight?! On the upside at least he knows who Ryuu is. I hope that the rest of the Rookies know too because that would be the most coolest/scariest bunch of aunts and uncles ever.
Tsk, so much for taking the high road Naruto. I certainly can't blame him, though, and I would be lying if I said I didn't get a vicious feeling of satisfaction when Naruto ripped Sasuke a new one. But revenge doesn't suit him at all and I hope he uses that infamous insight and acceptance to realize that keeping Ryuu from knowing the rest of his family isn't such a good idea... not that Ryuu seems much inclined to get to know them anyway.
Well, well, Ryuu obtained the Sharingan already? Totally badass. Did he inherit Naruto's Kyuubi powers as well? I can't help but point out that Ryuu learned how to use the Sharingan at the same time, or perhaps before, Itachi. I'm sure Sasuke has a deep fear of Okibi or any of his children turning out like Itachi, so to find out he has an unknown son (eldest son, to be exact) strutting around with the Sharingan and a healthy dose of resentment to boot has to unnerve the hell out of him... heh, do you plan to expand on this?
Well sorry for the long review and thanks for the quick update
Heh, boy I feel sorry for Yasu. She really should get hazard pay for this. Shika did you have to break up the fight?! On the upside at least he knows who Ryuu is. I hope that the rest of the Rookies know too because that would be the most coolest/scariest bunch of aunts and uncles ever.
Tsk, so much for taking the high road Naruto. I certainly can't blame him, though, and I would be lying if I said I didn't get a vicious feeling of satisfaction when Naruto ripped Sasuke a new one. But revenge doesn't suit him at all and I hope he uses that infamous insight and acceptance to realize that keeping Ryuu from knowing the rest of his family isn't such a good idea... not that Ryuu seems much inclined to get to know them anyway.
Well, well, Ryuu obtained the Sharingan already? Totally badass. Did he inherit Naruto's Kyuubi powers as well? I can't help but point out that Ryuu learned how to use the Sharingan at the same time, or perhaps before, Itachi. I'm sure Sasuke has a deep fear of Okibi or any of his children turning out like Itachi, so to find out he has an unknown son (eldest son, to be exact) strutting around with the Sharingan and a healthy dose of resentment to boot has to unnerve the hell out of him... heh, do you plan to expand on this?
Well sorry for the long review and thanks for the quick update
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boy what a surprise that was wOw! I like your take on our favorite boys lifes:) Looking forward to more ^_^
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I Fucking love this it's so awesome! I want more, I NEED more! It's the best I've read. No lovey dovie shit! It's cruel and hardcore! UPDATE SOON!!!
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Yes! Yes!
He deserves it.
He deserves it.
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for this day for so long.
I hope Naruto has a really hot lover out there to really nail in the coffin.
I hope Naruto has a really hot lover out there to really nail in the coffin.
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This chapter was awesome! And yes, the names really fit them well!
This fic is just getting better and better, I am so putting this up on my profile over recommended fics, if I haven't already. I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
This fic is just getting better and better, I am so putting this up on my profile over recommended fics, if I haven't already. I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs