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for Best Served Cold

by sakuyalove

person TheSimi
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh this was so very good! It seems like Sasuke' has a few more surprises coming his way. Thank you so much for this chapter and i can't wait to read more!
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright, this story is freaking awesome. Now, the reason the Uchiha and Uzumaki kids look like clones...hmm...Naruto was pregnant when Sasuke left him and he married that dark haired and dark eyes woman to cover for it? This is a good story I hope to read more soon!
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, this chapter was awesome! This fic is just getting more and more exciting, keep it up!
I can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter. Is Ryuu perhaps Sasuke's and Naruto's biological son? I mean through Mpreg?
Cause I doubt that Naruto would force his son to henge just to make him look like Sasuke. Grr..you've made me all thoughtful and curious right now. I want to read more! Please update soon!
Good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, WTF!!!!! Damn this is good!!!!!! Naruto had to be pregnant himself when Sasuke left him or something. I can't believe what happening. Sasuke stumbling when he saw Ryuu was so funny.XD Can't wait to see what Sasuke does when he answers his son and finds Ryuu.XD I'm so glad you came back to tell us you won't give up this story!!!!XDXDXD
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, very very intriguing. I am anxious to know why Ryu has such a strong resemblance to Okibi... I see much angst in the future of this fic.

Pleas, please update soon. I think this fic is starting to become a favorite of mine. xD

-Akiru-
person Ivy
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter!!! Was Naruto pregnant with Sasuke's child or is it another twist? Can't wait for the next chapter ;-)
person Nikana
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...really? O_o what? is this a mpreg? its awesome!!! the wedding was fake for naruto? he was (here comes the pregnant part) already waiting a son form sasuke chan? ¬¬ sly fox!
very good,please update when you RL gives you time.
ja ne ^^
person TiaA
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So to cover up his own pregnancy, Naruto married so poor girl with dark hair and who was dying or something? I don't get it that part unless he or Tsunade just killed the poor girl and then said she died in childbirth to protect Naruto and his son.

Oh, but Sasuke deserves everything that will happen to him for what he did to Naruto and for the stupid game of twisted rivalry that he had been playing in his head. Sasuke is truly vile. And that is why I love this story. I look forward to your next update. This is really interesting.

Later,

Sean
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GOOD STORY PLEASE CONTINUE I'm HOOKED. UPDATE SOON.
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha, take that Sasuke, Naruto's son Ryuu is more superior then your son Okibi! Plus it look like both Naruto and Sasuke taught their sons to distake eachother.