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Yay! We are getting down to the nitty critty here, so we know its a demon and that is what is sucking off Naru's power, ooh I cant wait for more, betcha its in the basement of the police station, that is why they have so many traps and stuff in there huh??? oh I love this, and will Kyuubi come out to fight the demon??? and if its a demon why couldnt Kyuubi sense it?? cant demons sense each other??? oooh I have to have more, loving this soo much, cant wait till the next chapter, thanks for the excellent read, huggles and smiles *interlaced with coughs from blasted flu* Mija..:-)

Excellent. I'm very glad that this came out as well as it did, because it's unimaginable that they'd not be awkward and pissy the next morning. And I think I like the way you write Granny cat best. She's like most old women, and likes getting her own way, much like a cat. Very nice job!

well that was really interesting.

Another fantastic chapter. I enjoyed the background you gave on Granny Cat. It's also interesting to see the slow reveal of all the pent up sexual tension.

Ahhh!!! YAY!!!! I had a sneaky hunch that you updated this today XD. LOL, I'm a day late but I'm still really happy I didn't miss it!! *Glomps u* I am soooo LOVING this story! The interaction was so damn good XD. I am so freaking happy!! Progress!! XD Admissions without the actual words and enough tension to make me crazy! *is grinning like an idiot*. Sasuke waking up and rolling under the fucking bed was Priceless LMAO! And the argument... damn... I didn't know whether to hug them or smack them, but I've never been so happy about somebody picking a fight as I was about Sasuke. And even though I would have Loved for Naruto to take the bait, I'm so freaking Proud of him that he didn't!! *Loves on you*. And the comment about getting on his knees... *dies*. I swear Naruto kills me in this - The things that come out of his mouth O.O, jaw dropping XD. Love it. Perfectly designed to drive Sasuke bastard wild. And OMG Granny cat *snickers* and loves her up XD. LOOL, Poor Naruto, he was just randomly abused all chapter XD XD XD Hahaha XD. And ZOMG... "He won't be having any daughters." :D*Tackles glompss u and molests mercilessly* THANK YOU!!!! XD ♥. I also really like the root of this mystery. Sasuke's family is in deep, and a demon. That's perfect, it fits beautifully into the Naruto-verse. And makes such great sense, I think being able to make the paranormal sensible and believable is an awesome talent which you possess in spades ;). I'm so excited to see where this goes from here. See how Naruto and Sasuke deal with both the demon and their new awareness of each other. You rock my world!! You actually made me read something for the first time in weeks.

I love this story. it's great to read. :D Hope you write more soon. sorry for the really bad review. I wish I could say more than just how awesome your story is, but currently thats all I can think off. :D

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GASP! Holy, my god this story is absolutely AMAZING!

Everything, everything about this story is just so well written. The plot and *cough* plot devices are just so well thought out and interesting. It has really captured my attention. Also I like the way you chose how to write Naruto and Sasuke's relationship. They were a bit wary and unfriendly towards eachother in the beginning yet now they are warming up to eachother. It just seems so realistic!

And I especially love the way you portrayed their first time. It wasn't that romantic or anything like that but it was raw and neccessary. It also broke off some of the tension that lingerered between them. Now they can build their relationship from there! HEHE. Plus...it was damn hot.

All the subtleties and nuances you put into your story are fantastic. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please please update soon :)

What the heck? AFF.net killed my review! So, let's try this again. I liked the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto in this chapter. I also liked the bits with Granny and Naruto, as if she was angry at him for, what . . . not letting Sasuke become a girl? I hope it doesn't mean a sex-change, or worse, m-preg, for this story. But I'm intrigued enough to want to find out. I also wonder, though I have a pretty good guess, what the Uchiha planned on using the demon for. I hope you can update soon. I'm anxious as to who has died in Konoha and what Sasuke knows, or thinks he knows, about why the demon was let loose or escaped and what it has to do with the Uchiha. Update soon!

the story is amazing please continue update soon because i am dying to know what happens. kisses and best wishes.

*grin* i love this story! ^_^ update soon~